/ Eastern / The Gods' Decree
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"Call me God and I will treat you as a benevolent servant worthy of blessings. Say I am the Devil and I will drench your world in blood and despair."
These were the words spoken by Sir Mouse as a thousand enemies surrounded him.
From his youth he could only look up to the heavens, but just as all his enemies before, It is now under his feet quivering.
If so be the case, why would he care what The Gods' Decree?
Gods or Devils it matters not. As they too will have to call him by the only name they dare to utter, Sir Mouse.
His path is to be one that is unhindered by any shackles and he intend to keep it that way.
Will you join him on this journey to becoming the existence who is forbidden?
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I’m on chapter 52 and I’ll tell you author; I love your novel so far, everything is so smooth, and the way the MC and FL carry themselves is just perfect. I just hope that there is not much time separation between them where one leaves and comes back like 100 years later. Overall, I love it.
I have been following this work for a few months now and can’t get enough of it. The two lead characters are strong, witty and have good chemistry. The world has just the right amount of conflict to keep you engaged and the story seems to be progressing at a good pace. Keep it up author!
This is my own work so I will of course be biased and give it 5 out of 5 stars. Also I've never written anything like this before, so for the time being I'm just having fun with it. I hope you can enjoy it and please leave insights if you can.
This review is my honest opinion as I felt about it while reading it. DO NOT judge this novel from my review and I will recommend reading few chapters before you judge it. That said, here's my review for the author. Concept was great and kinda not boring. Early chapters was great. However once the girlfriend was introduced, it became the flowery speech contest where both of them start speaking like some poets with increasingly cringe worthy lines. Taf will always start speaking in jargon which will test the limits of your patience especially if May is around. I read till around chapter 80 after which I just couldn't carry on. In my opinion, once a while is ok but the current amount is just unbearable Short chapters-I could skip 10 chapters and still guess what happened before. My opinion: either increase chapter size or story pace Story-One thing I always hated in novels is how the part of the so called grand destiny is revealed super early in the novel. I already know that they are in the lower planes.. the sect that they supposedly going to is super weak.. their country is weak.. There is a plane of gods from where the draconian(mc grandma character) came from. All these points should be slowly revealed in due time. My opinion: future plot should be revealed over a period of time. That dream was unnecessary. The trial could have been handled in a more better way.
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Starting this book I was A bit pessimistic but then I realize i started to like it. So I continued and it seems to have me hooked. Having not read many books in this genre. I like the fact that I was recommended by a friend to try this.
I am LordMouse and I approve of this book And because my word count is not enough I will allow you puny mortals to bask in the majesty and grandeur of the great LordMouse
Not seen any novels on here with a black main Character #BLM I think I started reading the minute I saw the Jamaica flag, not yo take away from the fact this is already one of my favourite reads and I haven't even caught up yet. The pace of the story is amazing although there is a little to be desired due to short chapters. I would recommend to anyone who likes fantasy and wuxia. Who could imagine an author to take a Mouse and raise a Dragon.
Very good writing. I love the plot so far and I love the characters. An extremely good read so far. 5/5 from me. Definitely worth a read. Love it.
A good read and a very likeable Mc. Since the author is new it makes it even more interesting. Please continue with more chapters as I am really liking it so far.
A very well done book with amazing character Interactions, plot development, and world design. There are some errors now and then bit this is not uncommon with original books either.
this novel has a potential to become extremely good if it will not lose the inital ideas xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
New in my journey but I also like your work so far. Keep at it and try Improving you go along through the process. I will continue reading and give my feedback as I read.
Nice work I like it very much.Not much to say but keep on doing the good work. Your current release is very stable. Just wish you could have more views for this original work
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it's really really good. honestly, the only problem I have is that I'm gonna have to make a billion accounts so that I can get up to date XD and there is indeed the con of 1 chapter every three days, but at least it's stable on that. rather than maybe early maybe late. anyways, great job author san
It is a really good story and it had me on hook all the time it is also an interesting plot it has many things that you will not expect the characters are also really well spoken for
When I first found this book I had an interest in it which lead me to out into my library to collect dust and now that I look at it I realized it has produced over 200 chapters and has come a long way from what it once was to what it is now.
Interesting plot......👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Pros: + Characters are unique and interesting and the dialogue is witty as hell + Pacing is pretty well done, author doesn’t drag things on too much + Story is very original and the author does his best to steer away from cliches Cons: - Grammar and spelling are a bit off sometimes but not so bad to be unreadable, easily fixable with an editor - Slow release schedule, I NEED MORE - Chapters feel a bit short but maybe I’m a quick a reader? - Not many POVs explored to expand on world building Conclusion: It’s a very nice read, can be mildly frustrating with some of the author’s grammar mistakes, especially if you’re a native english reader like me, but the author does correct his mistakes if you comment so it’s a good sign that he listens to feedback. As someone who has read A LOT of web novels, this ranks very high in my list of enjoyable reads since it is original and takes a unique take on the typical cultivation story. I hope this helps and have a wonderful day fellow reader! :) Sincerely, RobespierreK