摘要
Jack Darwin and 9 other candidates are taken from earth and have been chosen to compete in The game of Evolution.
In which each candidate gets a choice of 1 prime race and 2 minor races to control,command, and evolve.
The candidate will all be on the same planet of ludum mundi and will have to fight to survive against the other contestants and the world itself.
(Had this idea in my mind thought I'd try it out)
Also since there has been problems beacuse of the update I will be uploading under the same name for my profile and story on royal road.
https://www.royalroad.com/profile/308429
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One of the best mixes of Kingdom building, evolution and mc as God novels i have ever read but could be better with regular updates and less spelling errors.[img=update]
Updates are quite slow but im giving it a 5 for the star value. I am gonna say that this is perfect. Every chapter is great and is meaningful. Just read it. I like the concept and how it is done. We just need more chapters cause its too good. Tops off to the author who made this masterpiece. o7
The novel is great overall, but my only problem is the inconsistency in the facts presented. For instance, the occurrence of monster waves is supposed to happen every decade, with one granting a racial skill and the next a player skill. However, after the first wave, there's an 80-year time skip with only mention of the next wave, without any reference to the other seven waves that should have occurred, nor are there seven new skills in the MC panel. It's not just a typo between 'decade' and '80'; it's a significant inconsistency. Also, the civilization level in the panel shows as 0.3 when they were at the clan level, but years later, when they are tribes, the civilization level drops to 0.2. Despite these issues, the world-building and progression in the novel are excellent, and I highly recommend it. However, I urge the author (and this is for you) to create a facts and consistency notebook to refer to while writing each chapter and to edit past chapters if there are any changes made to maintain the quality of the work.
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Everything is great besides some mistaken words and some better descriptions, the update stability from others point of view seems great but as you can read from my username I’m a gluttonous being so I enjoy my stories I hope for many more stories and evolutions, thank you for the enjoyment this novel has given!
Really nice story. It has the flow to read and is fairly unique. The Grammer needs a rework but is only a slight enoyance. Updates are coming stady
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I haven’t seen the whole story unfold yet but from everything I have seen it’s a amazing project and the author does an amazing job of interacting with the community with him even taking advice from the community on how the story could progress.
this is a cool kingdom building novel with mc become a god and make his own race it's really cool and when I read it I really want to make a novel like this to and make my race become a saiyan but well i really don't have writing creativity 😅
I really like the book 📖 hardly ever comment but this is a good book I just wish it updated more
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ugh you know i stop reading this novel and i dont remember why but bow i do the MC's personality seemed so generic and too much of a goody too shoes and now I can't even read this you know when i see the mc becomes a god and creates his own race i expected race wars strategies and unique racial skills each race customs that kind of stuff and its been going great but the mc is just a big turn off for me welp i guess it boils down to that this isn't really just my cup of tea
I'm a french guy so i write in french. C'est une très bonne light Novel dans le genre litrpg, elle a une un énorme potentiel et peut sûrement devenir une hidden gem à l'avenir, le système et la construction du monde sont très intéressantes pour le moment. J'aime beaucoup le fait que ce roman soit centré sur le développement d'une race avec un protagonistes "dieu" avec une thématique de survie. J'espère que cette Novel ne sera pas abandonné comme tant d'autres dans le même genre. Thanks author for this good original novel [img=recommend]
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....................... I hope to create a cool story with an idea I've been thinking about for a little while I hope you enjoy thank you. 😊