/ Anime & Comics / The Fate of the Unknown: A New Future for the Naruto World
摘要
An otaku was run over by a car and reincarnated into the world of Naruto.
In order to survive in this dangerous world, he decides to become stronger than everyone else.
Follow the story of our MC and see if he actually achieves what he hopes for in the end - his goals, ambitions, and dreams.
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This is my first novel, and I would appreciate your support. Your comments will show me that my work is being appreciated and naturally motivate me to continue. Please feel free to share any potential improvements, so that this work can become even better and we can all enjoy it more.
I do not own the rights to Naruto and any characters appearing in it, except for my main character. The book cover also does not belong to me, and if the creator wishes for me to remove the image, they are welcome to let me know.
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6評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
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寫檢討
This is beautiful all the words that i can say but the mc does remind me of rudeus a tiny amount but i guess i can mind that since character development exists. For now he is still a child in the story so far and he behaves like one too. The story development is a tad bit slow, and the world background is developed fantastically the updates are quite stable too
Currently chapter 12 A Naruto story worth trying at least once. I love the characters and the MC so far and they don't break the immersion. It's a slow paced well built and thought out ff with an creative twist; it starts off with the MC being Itachi's gf and her mom as adopted son/brother. A story worthy of being in the top 5 rankings if it had a faster update schedule. The writing style is perfectly readable and makes time fly. I would remember this to any romance loving naruto fan. And at the very least, the author doesn't give the feeling of an amateur writer and that's saying something.
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The pacing is mid. Not enough character traits given to the MC regarding him as a reincarnator.
I like the story, keep it up and don't hesitate if randon come to tell you that the power system is wrong or the canon is not the same (because I have read thousands of naruto fanfics and there is always someone who criticizes and they think they are wise xD, it is better to do it the way you like it and you can ask for comments on how to improve so you can implement it in your own way).