Yukiko could feel something amiss.
She couldn't describe it very well, but it was akin to the feeling that she got before bath time.
Yuki didn't like baths.
She put down her crayon abruptly and looked up at her current babysitter.
"Where daddy?" She tilted her head.
Raymond was busy drawing a picture of himself and Tiche in a flower field while holding hands.
… She was his first woman, alright? Being a little ditzy over her was part of the experience.
Some would say a rite of passage even.
"Little lady, do you think I made Ti-Ti's head as pretty as it is in real life?" Raymond held up his picture with a worried look.
Yukiko kind of just stared at him with a droll look that was dangerously similar to Taira's.
"Ah…" Raymond scratched the back of his head. "You said something again, didn't you?"
Yukiko nodded.
"M-My bad…"
"Where daddy??" Yukiko asked again, with much more puffy cheeks.
*sigh* I’m gonna be real with y’all… I’m kinda at my wits end here. it seems like I try and try to the best of my ability to get this story more traction but it kinda feels like I’m throwing a brick at a wall and it’s bouncing off and hitting me in the nuts.
I really don’t even know what to do at this point. I really enjoy this story but Idek if it’s worth it anymore. so can somebody please tell me anything that you can think of that might be wrong with this story or something that I need to change?
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