/ Fantasy / The Fallen Punisher
摘要
Kayden, a young prosecutor, has lived his whole life trying to fit in and be a model citizen.
However, when the Awakening arrived and unleashed the mana across the Earth, Kayden lost everything.
He then decides to break free from the cage of morals that he himself had created.
Thus, in a world teeming with uncertainty, Kayden embraces the Trials, a series of perilous challenges that push participants to the brink of death in their relentless pursuit of glory and treasures.
At the same time, he begins to have dreams about a desolate wasteland, where an ancient palace stands in ruins, still guarded by an eerie black gate.
Determined to find the answers he seeks in the chaos of his new reality, Kayden embarks on the path of cultivation, gradually unraveling a web of lies and schemes covering the whole existence.
Follow Kayden on his journey to the top, which will shake the foundations of the universe.
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Hey yo. Shadow here/Taylor. I love love love your story thus far. Keep it up. Although yes your story slowly is becoming a new system; you have destroyed all tropes. Yes, the main character gets hurt and wakes up in a System; he is not dead like most rebirth novels. He is still alive; and willing to fight for Mana, if need be. The 'System' is that of an Alien Overlord taking over Earth and wanting to connect it to his Kingdom, but K is determined in due time, to stop that; at all means necessary. Can't wait to see where this story goes next. But please; don't make K make stupid fast decisions; or have him go through life alone uncovering the truth. You said he made a vow to change his life and live for himself and not others, but if he does get friends who want to help him; please don't have him turn them away immediately. Or if you do, they fight to stay. *Huge virtual hug*
I'm just giving it a three for now because I only read only one chapter if I read more imma change it
so far so good. I'm very picky when it comes to the novels that I stick with but so far this has drawn my attention and I would love to see this go somewhere. will this be continued or no?
writitng quality is very good and the story overall is ok although i think the characters need a little more development >>..........................................................
Chapter length is okay, starting is intriguing and the grammar is okay. I am no pro but I think it's a good book.
senior the best on recs and now in writing