/ Anime & Comics / The Fairy Duelist
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An anime fan wakes up in the world of Fairy Tail with some of the most powerful forces in Yugioh. What does one do with the power of The Seal of Orichalcos, The Light of Destruction, The Rune Eye, and a Barian Crest?
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Where is the story. 12 chapters of nothing but exposition. If you like wish fulfillment then maybe give it a try but the plot hasn’t shown itself so who knows where the stories going.
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Plain in simple love the fanfic not much else to be said since i am bad at giving constructive criticism since i have no knowledge of how a novel should be made and my grammar is atrocious so ill just leave a 5 star review and skedaddle.
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This is annoying😡! Most fanfic I find follow this "mc go to one of the main characters and tell their 'who life story'" shtick(in chapter 4), and what's worse is in chapter 5 the mc acts like he knows mira personally which he do not, and don't give me "but he has seen the anime and know he can trust them shtick".This is one of the many reasons why so many fanfic fail. So sad, the beginning chapters 1-3 wasn't half bad.