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The Dungeon Master (Remastered)

Fantasy 14 章節 57.0K 流覽
作者: Dragoster

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An eccentric restaurant owner, and his unnatural shop's daily life in a monster invasion apocalypse.

(Cover credit is Lia Booysen on Artstation. Contact me if you'd like it removed.)

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John_JHFG

Although I don't have much to say as the book is only at 5 chapters at the moment I really enjoy reading the book. .........................

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Cactus_Gun

Love it already Writing quality: great and little to no complaints on the writing, generally is rated to novels with normal grammar Stability of Updates: I'm not really sure but seems to be at a constant rate Story Development: Has a system and gods and all but seems to be on a different path than other stories and I'm really interested and excited to see what will happen (I hope it doesn't fall off) Character Design: MC seems like a good person- very straight up and the side characters don't seem boring (like the receptionist) and have great reactions World Background: I'm not that sure on it yet and we don't see that much except the store, dungeon, and awakeners association thing so I'm looking to see more about the mc backstory and so world building

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MiasmaLotus

The writing quality is very jumpy from the start with alot of bouncing, the development is so fast passed I'm lost, like the apocalypse just happened how are their people running s rank dungeons? it has amazing potential but needs to be slower and more descriptive.

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