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Warning, not the best English. And criticism is allowed so write review or comments to let me know. Just took the first thing that came to mind.
Don't own anything except the OC and a little plot. Also, the picture isn't mine if you want me to take it down says so.
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A Dragoon that died and was promoted to Warrior of Light. He was sent to Skyrim to become the Dragonborn will he find his way back or will he find his death while trying.
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Hey author! I don't know who you are. I don't know what you want. If you're looking for power stones or gems, I can tell you I don't have extra I am a cheap person... but what I do have are a very particular set of skills. Skills I have acquired over a very long career. Skills that make me a nightmare for people like you. If you drop this novel go now, that will not be the end of it - I will not only look for you, I will not only pursue you... but if you do drop this, I will look for you, I will find you... and I will kill you...kimosabe...
If you like to think everyone is nice, everyone should be nice, everyone deserves a second chance, everyone trusts you if you're nice, and other hilariously beautifully unrealistic things you can tell yourself, this is for you. I skipped the story of ff14 because i hated this exact thing. Not a fan of such childish naivety
Capítulo 28 It's good enough. I personally don't like harems so this Is not my style at all. I didn't like the idea about killing alduin so early in the story but when the mc became the dragonking because of that made me feel excited about what will happen from then on, Now for the bad things... I feel all the characters a little void, the mc is very plain just like all the other characters here. The only moment that the mc gave me the impression of being alive was when he challenge ulfric to a duel, that was awesome by the way, but all the other times he was void, no likes, no dislikes, barely an ounce of emotion in his talking and actions, aela looks like a sex addict in this story cause that's the on!y thing she does, lucia Is fine but i can't understand how can she be so happy with his parents always far away, that not normal, an abandoned girl that gets adopted is logical that the thing she want the most is attention from her parents. And now this last chapter Is the last for me. This man accept to marry a 1 month widow with the reason of ending a civil war when he can end it as Easy as breathing, he killed the devourer of worlds bit can't end a civil war in another way. And the thing that annoy me the romance don't existe here, they only care about sex. I understand that in Skyrim marriage is very simple and direct but the mc is from another world and his wife Is an elf, if you want an harem at least put some effort. Overall good writing quality, if there are some mistakes they doesn't make the reading unconfortable, nice updating pace and good ideas for the stoey but i don't like the characters design and specially the romance if there's romance.
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Great book so far keep it up and looking forward to more😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
I rarely, almost never review any novel, but here I have made an exemption, and must say that this is an absolute hidden gem. Elder Scrolls fanfics are exceptionally rare, not to mention crossover ones that are very well written. This fanfic is one of the best novels I have ever read, it has extensive Kingdom Building element and World Building. For Crossover, suitable worlds were chosen, namely Dragon Age and Witcher World, which is the perfect choice, once again, you rarely see good fanfics on these worlds.
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La mejor historia que e leído en mucho tiempo la calidad de historia es espectacular y muy interesante el personaje crece aprende y mejora el universo que tiene es maravilloso una historia de fondo muy interesante y emotiva el personaje principal no siempre está en lo correcto y el lo sabe comfia en los demás y madura en todos los aspectos necesarios
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Love the book but the story progressed a litle fast. in the game i realy liked the dark brotherhood and thieves Guild. the marrage went a litle to rushed. But i still like the story. [img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
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Amazing work and a good read, the idea makes me want to create a mod for skyrim using this story hell it would make a great play. My complaint is the grammar and word flops, like "he handled a two handed and swings it around" the weapons name is ommitted and other examples as well, other than that this is a great story
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Don't like it! Firstly what the heck is he? I mean when he appears in Skyrim the soldiers don't react to him realistically. You should have made him appear at least like one of the native Tamriel species rather he looks like a freak of nature between humanoid and Argonian. Lastly, he is too tolerant, I mean he tells the jarls not to judge all vampires as evil? WTF HAHA. Vampires a fu*king apex predators plus THE spawn of Malag Bal, genociding them shouldn't be a problem but boon to the world.