/ Anime & Comics / THE DRACONIC PHOENIX(A Bleach fanfic)
摘要
He was born into a new life without memories of his past, with powers he didn't understand from a so called celestial being but he didn't care since he had found happiness in this short new life. But are celestial beings usually so benevolent? Unfortunately he found out the hard way.
But now after escaping all the torture and finding himself in a new world that is only seen in books and movies. Will his rage and fury consume him? or will it consume the world? or will it consume whoever it is in the shadows pulling his life around like strings?
Find out yourself about his journey by reading, I'm not giving spoilers.
This is my first book so help and corrections in my writing style from my beloved readers is very much appreciated.
The cover pic is not mine and if the author wants me to bring it down, please tell me and I'd bring it down.
oh yeah don't forget to review. pretty please.
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Honestly, I don't know much about this kind of novel, but reading this book I got intrigued, I could not stop reading from the first chapter, it's funny how naive the mc is but I know that he would grow to be much stronger as time goes by, I can't wait for the next update. good job author.
There is a major problem I have with some readers. They didn't even read past the first 10 chapters and you're already complaining about how it's not even a bleach fan fic. In the end your review or comment is just based off the slow first 10 chapters and very biased instead of the whole story. It's like you telling me that you think pineapple is a terrible fruit after only eating the outside covering. People just leaving hate comments and reviews without reading the whole book is very annoying, I'm not being paid to write and yes this is my first book so it obviously can't be on the same level as a lot of others, but I take out of the little time I have to write a fan fiction and people don't even finish reading before leaving hate comments and reviews after only the slow parts at the beginning. This is very disheartening as a lot of good books are dropped because of hateful readers. As a new writer, I have obviously been paying attention to your comments, so I can better my writing skills, but a lot of people are not willing to read past the first few chapters where I didn't know much and wrote how I knew to. Please do continue to make comments to help me better my writing skills but, please do not leave a review without at least reading to the latest chapter available. I'd rather have no ratings than to see reviews that are obviously not true about my story and NO, I will not delete the bad reviews. You're welcome to make a more correct review after actually reading my book and not just skimming through it. Thank you for listening to my ranting.
Bad. Really bad. Half the time it's impossible to understand what is even happening. His backstory is built on nonsense and MC being a moron. Then he dies and he is who knows where performing naruto hand seals with his soul then it's hard to understand what is even happening. 69 phoenixes out of 420 dragons. Not recommended for people with logic. Or brains.
I just wanted to say that this is the most offensively terrible name I have seen for a story in my life. Minato unironically has better naming sense than this.
why even mention this is a bleach fanfic this is more of an amalgamation of a set of different ideas. which I couldn't make it past the first 10 chapters. The story is mediocre at best, no sort of thought is placed into the wishes or why the MC does certain things, just because.
Like the shameless author I am, I'm leaving a review on my book and I honestly think it's good but it's you guys thoughts that count so please don't leave without leaving a review. Also please vote because if we get up to a 100 powerstones there will be a mass release of 10 chapters.[img=recommend]
I tried, I really tried, but there's something in your fic that makes me want to quit. 1.-I'm not interested in the harem or anything like that. (I like solid relationships instead of pokegirl ones. Especially considering his situation of continuous torture. 2.-The inclusion of silvye bothered me a lot, but I still continued. I would have preferred a pet instead of a daughter. 3.- Too much canon for my taste 4.- Despite his age, he is still not able to control himself emotionally. 5.- He does not behave intelligently for his purposes. You can gather allies or servants but no... nothing 6.-A very difficult start to overcome, the first chapters are very heavy, it makes you want to quit immediately. Anyway, there are many more reasons to stop reading it, but on the other hand I can say that your writing quality has improved, congratulations. I wish you luck with your fic.
why did this feel like a drunken fever dream, nothing made sense, you should have instead made him reincarnate into base bleach, and forgo the entire torture, the way everything was handled kinda feels like it's just a story you made high and lost the main goal and plot you had. we had a system, now it's basically ignored, we have the dragon Phoenix stuff.. which is sightly ignored. dude I'mma be honest, a reboot and not using bleach as the main world and ignoring the Beginning after the end stuff. just use a world where everything would work better.
Its a good story but i was never a fan of a depressing start however i will say this has massive potential for latter on just now it needs to evolve a bit more to be a truly good story and not a bunch of depression.
I'm writing another review and this time I'm giving myself 5 stars this time but it's majorly for new readers to see. The story has a bit of a slow start because I don't want an MC that just dropped into another world and act like all cliche protagonist do. I want him to be different, to have an actual past and not a one paragraph summary of his original life and yes this is a revenge story, it obviously doesn't look like that at first but you'll see what I mean as the story unfolds so don't stop reading because of the slow and depressing start or you'll miss all the good parts this story has to offer oh and a small spoiler, the MC is going down the hollow route(in a way) but you can read to see what I mean
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I think people are being a bit unreasonable with their reviews i get where they are coming from but at least give it a chance until he actually gets reincarnated
Eh, i kinda expected more. An interesting oc mc with suffering in backstory, hollow evolution patchway after which he basiclly becomes a spectator to bleach cannon. IDK why author wants to keep ccannon intact this much, but it IS way too rigid. Its like reading bbleach rom diffre t pov with random remarks about said pov. Try to innnovate, add/edit events aside from just trhoeing mc there Also, good grammar, keep it up.
This book was darker than I expected. The book doesn’t start with bleach’s world, rather than that there’s a whole prologue arc that builds character that I really liked… Should definitely check out this novel
The beginning was captivating but it kinda declined as we went forward And the descriptions can be improved But all in all a great start for a budding writer
seems like most of the things have improved. also, this is a story with tragic start. so, if you don't like it you shouldn't read it😐😐😐😐
This is a good series worth checking out I like the way it references naruto and bleach in the action 🔥 However the overall story, dialogue and pacing can be improved to make it more engaging Overall its a good series 👌
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At the first pages of the book, I was quite hooked up. There's an interesting sense of growth that will about to happen later on and it was slowl and gradual and it feels like the character's growth was taken into a consideration and not just dropped in one go. If not because of tight schedules, I will continue to read!
Your story intrigued me, it has a good beginning, the hero may seem naive at first, but soon he will know pain and despair, turning into someone more mature (I hope not into the lord of the edge), and also, although there is not much plot yet, and it is not too complicated, it catches, and it is easy to read, So I'm staying.