摘要
Emberline Stark felt like an idiot.
She had lost her wealth.
Her Fiancé.
Her name.
Her self. All in one day.
She wanted to end it all, to stand on that bridge and give it all up. But just before she leaped, a hand grabbed her.
Now she is forced into a contract marriage with the nation's play boy and a modelling career. But when she discovers her husband's true identity, she must choose between her soul and her dreams.
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"I promise I didn't gawk...much." he said with a smirked.
My cheeks went from red to super hot and I said the one word that came to my head, "Pervert!!!"
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This story have progressed a lot in the past three months. I left it for a while and came back after seeing enough updates and I can't just put it down. Everything is so beautifully written. I love the male lead, and the female lead I can see little growth for the female lead who is a scaredy cat and as for the male lead there isn't much depth about him yet but he seems to care so much about her. I only wish to know the reason . so if you are someone who enjoys book with friends to lovers, well I think it's friends to lovers. 😂 or enjoy celebrity books .step sisters, good friends, then you need to read this. Zayn and Ember, are going to be a great dynamic duo. Ship name: Emyn. 😘 please more update
Hi. Shameless author review here. lol. I just wanted to inform you guys that I have a lot of plans for this book. It just doesn't involve one story. There are so many things yet to happen. So if you are in for a book with major character growth, changes, plot twists, slow-burn cute romance, then this book is for you. Our male lead is sarcastic, and our female lead is compassionate but that doesn't mean she is weak. I don't want to reveal too much. Hehe. But if you do want to join us in this journey welcome. I hope you stay as well. 😊
Overall, the story is good and I will recommend it. I'll also write another review once the story progresses. But here is my preliminary comments: I like that the story starts in the climax right away, giving a sense of excitement, wanting me to read more. Although the story is still in its early parts, I would say that the progression is becoming more interesting. This is just a personal opinion, but I think the author needs to give more dept to her character, although maybe she would address it in the next chapters. The writing style is also good and easy to follow. Minimal grammatical and spelling mistakes.
All I can say is more updates please. Not just that, work on your world development. Thanks .
I'm enjoying the story so far!! Wanna know what happens and how Ember and Zayn team up!! Plz keep updating !!
This novel is a fast-paced and engaging read that will keep you hooked from the first page to the last. The characters are well-developed and complex, each with their own motives and flaws. The plot is full of twists and turns, and the romance is hot and spicy. The author also explores the themes of family, loyalty, trust, and identity, and how they affect the choices and actions of the characters. If you are looking for a thrilling and passionate romance novel, you should definitely check out The Devil's Ember. Good job author!
As the story is still in its early stages, I can't say much more except that it's intriguing and it's being delivered well, by the author. The characters are likeable and the story is progressing nicely, so I wish you luck.
I love how you deliver the story. The main character is okay, acted so natural and showcased the feelings.The only problem is you never mentioned what is the name of the character having a 1st Person POV. It disconnects a connection with the readers.
I just realized I haven't dropped a review on this book before. But all I can say right now is how good it is. All I need now is coins to unlock more chapter. I am seeing dynamics in the characters. Ember is her own person Zayn, oh Zayn, he is so mysterious. sometimes he is like the bad person, sometimes he is good . Also, I just discovered why the book is named the Devil's Ember. Because Zayn is the devil himself. ahhh. I really can't seem to know how this book is going to end but I am sat, take all my coins just give me chapters. I recommend this to people who like to read multiple genres book .Slow burn romance. But sexual tension and regular banter, with a playful male lead . 😘
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Hey girlie, I just want to let you know you have an awesome story going on. I’m very interested and intrigued by the characters and the storyline and of course the plot. There are some ways you can write your narration between ember much more easier to understand. I felt that you use the correct words perfectly, but you put it in the wrong position so then it gets confusing. Some things that you interpret can be wordy like for example. When you mentioned about Ember’s dress, being drenched, and you said you were trying to relate that to goosebumps. Which you can, but instead of explaining that you can just say that she felt goosebumps. or continue the sentence and word it differently. You are a very good writer already, I really like your story and I want to continue reading it. But just a tip don’t kill yourself putting too many words to explain what you want for the readers. you are already doing such a good job, especially from your other novels. Lastly, I also rated your road background lower, but honestly there’s not enough chapters to show that, so please don’t take offense. I’m actually planning to come back and write your novel again once you have more chapters. (I promise it will be a shorter review 😂) I hope I was helpful to you have a wonderful day❤️