/ Fantasy / The Deal With The Deviless
摘要
"The brightest flame casts the darkest shadow"
This is a story about Akio, a normal boy without a guardian or friends.
& when he finally found a friend, fate did not like that. He lost his first friend in a terrorist attack, to save his friend, he made a deal with the deviless. He gains superhuman abilities but is unable to control them so he unconsciously creates a sub-personality to control the power.
Akio as a result gets two personalities.
He is a cowardly boy but his other personality is the opposite of him.
He has left to take revenge. And to find a place to start a new life.
Will the hero survive the cursed fate and a destiny carved in hell?
Will he know happiness or all that awaits him is sorrow and pain?
Find out in this novel.
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This novel for me is like a Bible for believers, I read it before going to sleep with tears in my eyes but if I were to describe it I would probably say this: beautiful great good brilliant sumptuous elegantly adorable appealing unparalleled divinely wonderfully delightful enchanting captivating beautifully seductively exemplary perfectly enchanting superb astonishing laudable wonderfully great superb irresistible grace graciously breathtaking stunning fabulous calligraphic beautifully wonderfully incomparably magically wondrous intoxicating exceptionally
Good bock though there are some mistakes but I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it is as good as this on or better.[img=update] I thank you for making this novel and I hope you will keep on making more.
Honestly, I don’t understand why this is so positively rated. The main character is a pathetic loser who constantly says “I’m cursed!” Disgusting.
It's nice to read this, it reminds me of the story I used to read, so far just minor errors and a little missing punctuation on each paragraph but for the story itself, it's great, keep it up thor, you have potential here!
The sentences are a bit awkward and confusing, but at least it got the story... I'm hoping for this novel's future improvements. Keep writing!
I do like this story a lot, holding a simple and entertaining tale that some will come to enjoy. though i have to say there are some grammatical issues here and there i really did enjoy the characters and their interactions here! you should give this a read if you haven't
This story is really interesting. The writer also manages to make readers wonder about the next chapters with each ending of the previous one making readers can't wait to see more. Keep up the good work!
Although there is not many chapters uploaded but what l came to after reading a few chapters is that it's gonna be quite mysterious type of story...... Liked the story and characters development..... That girl Hirata is quite mysterious l must say.... It will hook u up for sure.... Recommended this book to everyone...
first, i gotta say wow. it drew me in - the characters and the world. I definitely want to find out more about what else is going to happen in the story. good job!
The author's story development and sense of humor are both great, and I also enjoyed the frequent action, but the reason I gave less than 5 stars because there are a lot of grammar issues that distract from the good parts. I think if that is cleaned up a bit the writer's fun style can really shine.
hi dear author, the book is phenomenal. I love to read it more and more. I fall in love it's characters and world background. Thank you author for giving us a good read......
It looks very good, the start got me hooked to it. The first impression is always important in novels and you nailed attracting me into the story, I’m enjoying the story. Keep up the great work!
The story is great though some grammatical mistakes can be fixed, the author has done a great job in progressing the story, keep up the good work🍃
This novel is captivating, I usually don't read this kind of books, but this one is attention-grabbing, with excellent Idea, plot, and characters are well developed
I loved the first chapter. It really drew me in the story. Hinata is so mysterious. Can't wait to know more about her. Btw, the writing style is simple and easy to read. That's why i enjoyed it. Great job author.
The story was creative and unique. It was a breath of fresh air with the characters and the setting of the story in Japan. The twists and turns that happened through out the story was entertaining as well. Though there are some grammatical errors and other writing improvements can be made. The writer has potential and I’m looking forward to the next read for sure.
So far so good story nice pacing and nice plot, I am looking for more chapters this story will rise and the writer did a fantastic job, keep up your good work
Good story bruh! I like the ingenuity of the MC here! But, somehow I feel annoyed with Hinata, you know? so mysterious! well, apart from that, i quite like it!
This book has a definitely bright future if the author chose to keep this up and don't drop it, thx for the great novel 🙏 .......... . .
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