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摘要
Raio is a young experiment originating from one of Orochimaru's labs. He's 'rescued' by Konohagakure ninja and is placed into government housing, but now has to face other trials and tribulations-- navigating the expansive Shinobi world while fleeing from Orochimaru's influence.
There's one thing he has to handle. The limitless hunger weighing him down, the craving for something more, and the unexpected memories and powers he gets after consuming any 'mystery meat'.
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The diction used here is really good, nothing about the story seems amateurish or cringe which might often happen with a naruto fanfiction. Also the updates are consistent which make it all the better, and there are a lot of details about Raio that fit in with his character. Definitely a story worth following :)
CarrionNewt here, author of Curtails of Life. TCoL is the first of many Webnovels I plan on writing. The Curtails of Life involves an MC who's relatively on par with Meruem from Hunter x Hunter in terms of powers and abilities and the same level of wit; forcing the story to a fast-paced action plot line with the fear of constantly outrunning Orochimaru and those from his past as an experiment. The story will have harem-esque elements with some romance, though this will come into play much later in the story as the characters grow and develop more. Thank you for reading my story~. I hope you enjoy it as much as I do. <3 Any constructive criticism, comments, and advice is always welcome.
very good!!!!!!!!!! very good!!!!!!!!!! very good!!!!!!!!!! very good!!!!!!!!!! very good!!!!!!!!!! very good!!!!!!!!!! very good!!!!!!!!!! very good!!!!!!!!!! very good!!!!!!!!!!
There are no obvious spelling errors, at least I haven't found any so far, the update is stable and the story development makes sense, not much to say about the character design. I'm not giving 5 stars because it's still too early to reach a conclusion, the character's actions are consistent with what was established and shown from the beginning of the story, the story is worth reading.