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What happens when a delinquent gets a system suitable for himself? That would be pretty bad at the same time cool right? Aurum Est is a delinquent who just wants to have a good fight or you could just say he is a battle junkie.
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Honestly great read loving the fast pace as it’s a good change from all the books that take there time and add filler chapters throughout the story that really serve no purpose. The mythology aspect in it is fantastic as it’s under utilized and is one of my favorite things. The story covers all the key points a story needs while only lacking in character development of the mc because of the lack of filler, it’s a nice change though and would recommend this book to anyone looking for a good casual read. Keep up the good work and I’m looking forward to reading more
This is good. The story plot and character development maybe a bit fast, nut the author compensates through publishing at least one chapter a day. The 'system' is now a thing, I don't think that this one is redundant. It has quite a lot of references from different religions, games, etc., and I am still expecting a lot from this web novel and its author.
I recommend me this web novel for all of those who enjoy the fantasy genre. Although the plot on this one might be a little bit fast, it still shows potential and it also reflects its author's creativity.
The first few chapters are too short and the story progression is really fast... I feel like you need to increase the CP cost because the way you write it, he can easily gain CP. Also just add a side story about AE past and about the great war
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Hello I am the author of this story! Lemme be shameless and put 5 star on this one. I can't really help it y'know cuz tis my novel that I created. Anyways I am not going to be consistent on my chapter updates and im not sure how many chapters I can publish per day. Sometimes it may be 3 somtimes 6 even sometimes nothing at all. I am still a student so please be patient when reader this...