摘要
This is the story of Tang Yao, and how he rode to fame in the famous game called Reverie.
Tang Yao is a high school student, that is a bit out of the ordinary. He is an expert at martial arts, and an extremely intelligent child. However, he moved to America when was 8 years old, due to his grandpa dying after falling down the stairs. His parents moved to America because, they wanted Tang Yao to give up martial arts and to stop practicing them. Which led to enmity between them, the only people that Tang Yao cares about is his slightly obese friend Alexander, and his dear sister Jie Yao. Tang Yao lives, a leisure life without having to worry much about food, or money. However all of that will change, after both his parents experience a fatal car crash...
[Watch out for spelling, or grammar mistakes. Apologies in advance =) Please Enjoy!]
This is also more of a comedic novel, so if you don't like that. Well... that kinda sucks, but its your loss.
***Quick Note, there will probably be a lot of profanity used.***
Also PS this story is about an insanely op charcter, if you dont like that then this story is not for you. Like really OP
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really nice novel, hope u continue writing the novel, i really enjoy reading this novel everyday so keep doing ur best at this novel. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Well im the author, and just found out i could rate my own story. Also if would be weird if i didn't give myself 5 stars, since this is my story and I believe it to be okay. I give it 5 stars, because who wouldn't, give their story 5 stars if they made it. (Was not filling in space.)
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first and foremost i haven't started reading it yet.. this is just for the exp.. maybe tomorrow i will leave my verdict on this novel.. hope its good because im running out of novels hahaha
Nice story, for the reader who dont like op mc its not recomended.. But for who like op mc its a good story.. Although the background of the game world its good enought.. With more detail world like explaination about who ruled the world, any legendary hero or something, how many kingdom, is there demon or devil who will attack the kingdom.. Etc.. Keep up the good workkk... Hehr
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Wait a minutee, i can write another review and give myself 5 stars. Ofc i would do it, im sorry for being so shameless, but you cant blame me right? Im the author after all.
Because this sovereign in a good mood today I will give you five star.....! Because this sovereign in a good mood today I will give you five star.....! Because this sovereign in a good mood today I will give you five star.....!
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i love how op he is its so good ...............................................................................................................................................................................
Funny plus 140 characters ".................................................................................................................
The only thing I enjoyed reading was the game information. Personally I think the story is pretty bad first you have the whole parents killed in an accident ordeal. Is he even able to legally look after both himself and his sister? Usually in this situation they would be taken in by a relative and if not go to some sort of foster home. Next would be the power balance of the game. Next would be the power balance of the game. Its completely nonexistent. Usually all players of a game would start out with the same stats, no skills, nothing. But the MC here gets a endgame class and weapon right off the bat. And this gets far worse as the story progresses with him being able to take on level 100 and over when he hasn’t even hit level 20 and it has barely even been 10 chapters in. I just dropped it when numbers like nonillion were introduced. I could write more and start nagging about how the parents had a terrible reason for moving and just how stupid the whole ‘Stick Emperor’ thing is but I digress. Overall there is no set path for the story, it has a lackluster set of characters and a mediocre game with terrible power balancing and design flaws right off the bat.
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ONLY ONE WORD NICE WORK. ....NEED TO FILL 140 WORDS 😎DOT DOT LOTS OF DOTS N LOTS OF DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTS N NICE NICE VERY NICE ........................<(>_<)>
Hope u dont drop this story, like other authors. The story is very good and fits my taste of OP. ))())))))))())()()())()()()()))()]][]]][[[][]](]][[]]][][][][][([[[[]]][[][
just read the first few sentences in chapter 1. Tang Yao made me laugh. The fatty becoming the mc. nice touch. hahaha is this some form of inception? or did we land in the matrix? haha good work. keep it up! he must have been killed by a truck inside conviction hahaha lol