/ LGBT+ / The Boy With The Pink Hair
摘要
A Police Officer and a Gang Leader, what could go wrong?
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- 寫作品質
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- 人物形象設計
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寫檢討
An interesting start. It was pretty easy to read through the 2 chapters. The characters have a lot of potential and the general vibe of the story makes me want to see more. Kudos and keep writing.
I really enjoyed reading this book, the plot is interesting, I can see the characters infront of me while reading the book, [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's a good story. The plotline was interesting that really hooked me. It was well-written, and the writing style was good. I like how the characters are. The characterization was well-done. I really like their attitudes and temperament. It's barely starting, but so far, the story development was well-paced, although the world-building was still hazy. However, there were just a few typos and minor grammatical, capitalization, and punctuation errors, but those could be revised or edited. I can distinguish the transitions, but I think it could still be better. I'm honestly looking forward to this story's progress and the growth of the characters. Overall, this novel is remarkable and has a lot of potentials. I wish you the best of luck, Author-ssi!
This novel was fire, I enjoyed the chapters I've read so far. The plot was unique and the ideas were fresh. There were a few grammatical, punctuation and capitalization errors but nothing much to have a major effect on the story. The story progressed at a good pace though some scenes could be transitioned into a bit better. Overall, this novel has a bright future. The synopsis was literally only a few words but it was all it took to truly pull me in. [img=recommend]
Loved Faline(aka KG1). He is a fun loving and a caring person, who supports and takes care of his gang members. The character design of the characters was well done, personally I felt the hair colours quite interesting. Waiting for next chapters to know about how things go between Faline and Apollo. Keep Going!!
This is good. This must be the first book I've read yet with a gangster leader dyed in pink hair. Writing quality is good. You write fast with updating. The story started in a shop with robbery as the first onslaught. Setting is in Yokohama. KG1 or Faline. I'm interested to know how he will get out of the police station after getting captured. Keep going, Web!
A great start and a fun read. It’s just the beginning and it’s only clearly going to get better. It’s well written and the characters are relatable. Can’t wait for more. A very interesting story in progress.
This is me replying to the question in the synopsis: a whole lot can go wrong 😂 but they will obviously fall in love duh 🤭 the character of Faline is well described. The fact that he has pink hair sends me feels 😍 and I could just imagine him with those leather pants, bomber jacket and white shirt. Literally a bad boy 🤧 anyway, as I read through the story, I enjoyed how simple it was written yet not boring .I'm definitely going to save this in my collection cuz Faline has fascinated me. I can't wait to read more on the interactions he will have with the cop, Apollo .He is married tho, so I don't know how that's gonna work, but anyway keep up the good work [img=recommend]
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