/ Urban / The Boss's Magical Secretary
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Rose Wyatt, a seemingly ordinary personal secretary to the enigmatic CEO of Walden Group, Asher Walden, hides a dark secret. As a witch, she has carefully woven her life into the human world, concealing her true nature.
All hell breaks loose when she starts having feelings for Asher. With a dangerous enemy lurking in the shadows and love rivals vying for Asher's attention, Rose's magical powers become increasingly erratic. The risk of exposure is higher than ever, and her growing affection for Asher complicates matters further. Can Rose balance her secret identity with her budding feelings for the man she loves, or will her magical abilities ultimately tear them apart?
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Latest reading status: ch 10 As can be read from the summary, the story is set in a world where magic exists. The human world, where non-magical people reside, doesn't know the existence of a magic world/community. It's where the MC, Rose Wyatt, came from. She's a witch, who's working as a secretary to a human boss. Though it's not yet clear how strong she is with her magic, one thing is for certain: she isn't motivated to learn things, despite how she could quickly do so with her magic. One thing I like about Rose is her frankness. There was one scene wherein her mentor said he doesn't like her boss because he's indecisive, only for Rose to reply that her boss pays her, so she likes him. That just amused me, for some reason 😆 I also didn't expect the ML, Asher, to find out Rose's secret so soon; So the tags didn't lie, the story really is fast-paced. Overall, I like what I've read so far 👍
I just want to add an update my previous review. and increase it! after reading my comments and review the author has put in a lot of effort to go back and fix some of these things that were initially a little confusing or could use a little editing. as a reader I appreciate this as many don't, or will fix a word here and there, but I can tell a lot of effort was made. which is great because I love the story and the plot and the characters!!! I hate to see the book not reach its potential. but I think it will gain more traction!!! it's fun and uplifting, it has drama but not in a depressing way. definitely a fun read, or listen when I am driving and want to feel stress free!!!! keep up the good work. just keep in mind the readers don't know what you know, so make sure we can clearly understand and u will do good! 👍😊
Editing could be better but the story is cute. The FL and ML have chemistry and I love how it doesn’t drag.
okay I really like the plot and the story line, but it could be written slightly better. although it has gotten better since the start, it can still be confusing at times. I still got sucked into it though and read all available chapters, as I said I really am enjoying the story line, but if the author would go back and edit the story I believe it could be a top seller. you just need to make things more clear. although the spelling is fine it's more that some sentences or paragraphs don't fully make sense or they feel like they don't belong. every scene should clearly end and begin, and every fact or detail should be clearly explained. remember, we don't know everything that you do, so we need everything explained to us, and clearly. Is this story translated? if so that would make more sense why certain things are confusing. I'm not trying to be harsh, but I hate to see such a good story not make it when some editing could solve everything. just make sure everything is clearly explained and we know when scenes are changing and fully understood what happened on that scene. and be consistent, for example, Lydia started being called Claudia. you mentioned a Ward but you don't use it in a context that would explain what it is. you mention Corra has 5, her cousin 100 and her brother 0, but you do not explain 100 of what and what this means to have this number? I really like the story but like I said it needs editing. it feels a little rushed at times. or seems more like to your ideas where flowing so fast in your mind that you tried to keep up with them on paper, when you should make notes of them first, and then slow down, plan it all out, and then put them all in the story with more descriptions around them. have someone who doesn't know the story test read it maybe. Basically just make sure others are able to understand what's going on, and it will be an amazing story. can't wait to read more! hope it gets better as I hate to walk away if it gets more confusing. as I said I really like the plot and story line and how is all playing out!! we don't get left in suspension forever waiting for reveals or things to play out and I like that the people are dumb and can realize things most people would. good luck!!
It is really entertaining, I really like the plot and development of the characters, I recommend it if you want to have an entertaining read, I hope you give this work a chance, you won't regret it!!
am interested in this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. big up to the author it's very encouraging
Fascinating! !!!!!!!! I like the style of writing. Hope one day my writing style will be this good 🥲
I love this story so much from the moment I read the first chapter im unable to put it down can't wait till the end to she their happyeverafter