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Our protagonist a nobody shall rise through the ranks and become a god feared or loved. Which path will he choose?
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Anticipation as a chapter name is spot on as im anticipating the second chapter other then the spelling mistakes its quite a good start for what could end up in a good story hopfully it will be continued as the description does give hints for the future of the book as well as the title
Despite spelling mistakes its a very good story making me exited what will happen next and the Reaper seems to have quite some humor. Definetly worth a try
Nice setting and each chapter ends with a littl clifhanger and despite only short chapters the mc defelopment is crazy definetly worth a try
Guys please dont mind the minor Spelling errors, in my opinion this despite only having 3 chapters is such an amazing story it really catched me instantly lets support the Author as best as we can!
the story is not bad even if the chapters are a little short you can see that the author has tried, there are various grammar errors, but the plot is good even if for the moment nothing concrete has been done except travel a bit, I hope the author continues that this story has good potential although I think the levels are too easy for both players and him
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