/ Anime & Comics / The Beginning After the End - God of the Mana
摘要
What would happen if a reader addicted to the novel and fan fic of The Beginning After the End woke up in the middle of the Elshire forest as a baby without knowing how he got there, being taken in by Rinia Darcassan? Will he try to change the fate of the characters he came to adore through the novel but could only see suffer or will he resign himself to the tyranny of fate and the ruling gods of that world? The original work The Beginning After the End is property of Turtleme, this is just a fan fic from my own perspective
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it's pretty new so I can't say much about development and update stability but it's amazing so far. The author seems to have a deep understanding and love for tbate. Keep up the great work! 👍😁
one of the most well writen tbate fan fiction in my opinion, but the author give all the power up he needs and he is still weak also he is mentally unstable ☠️, and it seems like there is a second soul I don't get why many authors always do this BS and there are too many unnecessary drama too
need more chapters.. don't drop this fanfic..need more chapters.. don't drop this fanfic..need more chapters.. don't drop this fanfic..need more chapters.. don't drop this fanfic..need more chapters.. don't drop this fanfic..need more chapters.. don't drop this fanfic..need more chapters.. don't drop this fanfic..need more chapters.. don't drop this fanfic..need more chapters.. don't drop this fanfic..need more chapters.. don't drop this fanfic..need more chapters.. don't drop this fanfic..need more chapters.. don't drop this fanfic..need more chapters.. don't drop this fanfic..
This review is from chapter 11. I love the story so far. Top notch writing barely any grammar and spell mistakes. The story development is promising with how the plot will separate from the original. Can't wait for the butterfly effect to finally show. Character representation is amazing. Dialogues are nice done, and the author has a good idea with power levels. I am looking forward to the action scenes.
Author please don’t drop this, this is the best tbate fanfic I’ve read hope you come back soon 🙂↕️
It's a great fic, but there haven't been any updates for a long time, I hope it hasn't been abandoned! I recommend reading it, one of the best tbate fics I've ever read
Genial👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Great story, please continue writing it. It’s currently my favourite fic I’m reading now
Wonderful. I hope the writer continues the story and does not stop. I hope you continue, my brother......[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
there are too many unnecessary drama too[img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
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Very good story so far, I look forward to more chapters!👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀
Excellent, wonderful, keep writing 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥳🥳🥳🥳 👍👍👍👍🥰🥳🥰🤩🤩👍🥰👍🤩👍🥰🥳🥰 🤩😍😍🤩👍🥰🥳
Autho r who is the Female Lead in the story ....,.. ............................................
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interesting story [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
i love it so far i can't lie, the character to every thing else would definitely read the whole things if it was completed. So please finish it. you have my support bro
great so far[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]