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"This web novel will talk about the journey of Asura, with an unknown origin, reaching the peak of the entire Big World. In his journey, he will not be alone; his friends will also travel with him and help him stay on the correct path because when he gets angry, the only thing he can think of is to kill, kill, and kill..."
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I am glad, you are back . when you take a break due to your exam , I thought you gonna drop it, but after a week you came back and started to deliver chapters again so keep it up.
I am new in reading web novel and this novel was new and recommended show I try it and I like it, Overall good novel for a beginner like me.
Story is good but explanation of characters is lacking like how MC look like ,what his hair color, and what clothes he is wearing etc. Updates are quite good and the quality of chapters is increasing . Overall good novel as a beginner writer. Keep it up ASURABOY.
I am looking forward to how this web novel gonna end. So, keep writing and make sure to make MC more ruthless and if you can add tragedy scene, I am gonna love this.
"I am happy to see that people are now responding to my novel. I will do my best to improve it according to your advice." So, cheer me up, and thanks for the reviews.
When I first started reading this novel I thought it would be boring, but it's getting interesting And I am getting addicted to it because it releases a chapter daily.
This novel is good,1st chapter is good, 2-5 is somewhat similar to NSHBA, but after that it has its on story which is going good right now. I will recommend this novel if you like cultivation novel.
Story starts with quite a unique way I really liked it ,after reading the first chapter I assume mc gonna be overpowered.the character introduction to the story is done in a nice way .I have high hopes for this novel .keep writing.
The story is overall good, starting was good but the middle chapters was lame compare to other chapters but now it again started to get intresting.
I will try to do my best for my fellow readers and update story as quick as possible . one chapter per day is not impossible for me to provide , so please support me so that I can give my best