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When the end has come sometimes it becomes an opportunity
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The structure of the writing is the biggest issue, though that may change later on. I heavily dislike the lack of 'paragraphs' and "Speech" that is meshed together. It makes reading a chore if there is no spacing/paragraphs. The spelling is good, much better than average on this site.
all in all it is good but it is too cringy for my taste and i can't to see understand the whole scenario it is extremely confusing and world building is not proper
Author clearly had a good idea of what to write about. But then proceeded to write it very poorly. The world is very different and we don't know what differences are there and why. Why are there LOTR style elves? Why are there TES style dragons and Akatosh? How come these changes mean nothing, create no butterfly effect and even after thousands of years the MC was able to arrive at a pretty much canon compliant Wizarding Britain? I hope you get at least one beta reader, the story is a mediocre one in Webnovel standarts at the moment. And when a story is at Webnovel standarts, it means in other sites they wouldn't give it the time of day.
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this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..
I love the whole raised by elves storyline even though it felt a little forced to buts still super epic. I can't wait read more and see what else this author can come up with.
Love these type of stories!!!!!!!!!! Keep it up author qqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq
Good premise. I always love reading stories that are based into the far past. Good work, and keep writing! .................,.................