/ Anime & Comics / TENSURA: the slutty slime chan
摘要
What if a gay man woke up in the body of rimuru and go back in time to get em dick
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榜單 
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3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
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- 人物形象設計
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寫檢討
It is an impressive fanfic as I have never read something so intriguing since not many tensura fanfics do this that is why like the overall story in my own opinion...Now to be serious the writing quality was good but needs improvement in how well you structure the sentences but it is good or great compared to others I have read so far and didn't think of giving a review... of track whte was I yes work on detail writing try practicing bye writing little details and gradually build up in drafts like paper writing then try transferring to the story as this is something I usually do for English class...that is all I can give for an honest review please don't take my words seriously if I've imposed just do what makes you comfortable...
hey guys, author here, so this was just a spring of an idea since the world of tensura has a lot of beautiful men, and I thought, why not make a story like this, right? so yeahh I hope you enjoy this story