/ Anime & Comics / Tensura: The Epic Tale of Rimuru Tempest!
摘要
That time I got reincarnated as a primordial demon, instead of a slime.
Hey guy's new story for ya so read. Also english is not my first language so there will be some grammatical errors. Not much but there will be some, so please bear with it for me.
And even if you read there is nothing to lose for me. So make sure read it.
Original story and characters belongs to the original writer who is "Fuse".
This is just for fun so don't take anything personally.
This story contains sexual intercourse, courses, and violence so read with your responsibility.
Also the pairings are;
1. Rimuru x Ciel. ('Cause it's best and perfect ship)
2. Rimuru x Shizue. ('Cause it's a really good ship in my opinion ofcourse)
3. Rimuru x Chloe. ('Cause she deserve him)
4. Rimuru x Velzard. ('Cause in my opinion Velzard deserve someone like Rimuru instead of Guy. Also Rimuru deserve atleast one milf)
5. Rimuru x Velgrynd. ('Cause Rimuru deserve one milf and I can't choose between Velzard and Velgrynd so I take both of them)
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A good story to read for Tensura fans. it has a very good plot and the character development is also good. the explanation of the skills and background is also good so all this considering I would like to say it is a good story to read.
OK everyone hates old Rimuru because his naive..But the rimuru in this novel is wine-like a child who cries if he does not get his way..he bullies everyone around ..RIMURU IS GOD VELDANAVA MILIM FATHER.
extremely bad English. further more allot of inconsistancies with the original story are present. i don't recommend you reading it.
did you have to creat a primordial version of Rimuru[img=Cries]🤦🙍!!!!!!? Really author A version of Rimuru + Primordial + Supreme Deity = Disaster 🎆💥🌍 . You should have never made this version of Rimuru . It is Big and Giant DISASTER . It destroyed the holl storyline .
A good story to read for Tensura fans. In this fanfic author has made Rimuru insanely strong. It has a very good plot and the character development is also good. The explanation of the skills and background is also good so all this considering I would like to say it is a good story to read.
please don't drop this story because it is a very interesting, entertaining and enjoyable story i have read up until now
Love this need more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
This is honestly one of the best Tensura Fanfics I’ve read, I like the new perspective and confidence of the new Rimuru. Though some plot point may be over explained or may be a little complicated, it’s still great and would recommend to anyone.
I enjoyed reading this, the only flaw that does not really have one is that the author tends to come out of a long paragraph on the statistics of the characters in the middle of the chapter. I honestly passed everything
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Ten days break then ten chapter in one time and fanfic very nice story writing but hey can you make it make it multiverse traveling type with a pace I think you will add tensura in fanfic Thank you
waiting for new chapter and re-read [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This Novel is quite interesting has a lot of potential as a fanfic story. Yeah there maybe some grammatical errors. Like any light novels. But besides that it's quite a good read interesting story to see of what will happen to rimuru if he reincarnated as Primordial. Overall it's quite great. Keep up the Good work author. Hope you keep uploading more. I'm interested to see where the story will go.
the idea behind the plot has potential, but the grammar and execution are just horrendous.