/ TV / Teen Wolf: As A King
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"what would you think will happen to you if you died do you think you'd meet your R.O.B Random Omnipotent Being
well that happened to me you should read and find out what happens to me in a new yet familiar world"
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He talks about op wishes and then gives himself 3 wishes that are pretty much just enhancing his looks you can get that with one wish and then for the last 2 only ask for regen 10x and god lvl talent really that's just a waste. not worth the read.
this story is unreadable do yourself a favor and find a translator I don't know what language you are translating from but whatever source you are using to translate is garbage I read 3 chapters and I had know idea what I was reading not only that there are only like 6 actual chapters
1 star- because you are writing a fanfic 2 stars-because yOu are writing a **** wolf fanfic 3 stars -because you are Writing a r-18 harem fanfic =5 stars 😋 Fuck them all😁
Rarely do I see such a bad writer. Like wtf are you even saying? Did you copy and paste this into a machine translation? You can barely tell whats going on. It's like its written by a 12 year old kid who watched naruto for the first time, it's so edgy.
You should have made him OP like look at Captain America with the Super Soldier Serum and look at him it's like they are from 2 different worlds. Other than that and punctuation it is perfect and for your Punctuation try Grammarly. It is a great app for punctuation. The only problem is that it doesn't have slang so yeah. This is something great thing you are doing for the Teen Wolf fan-fic community so yeah Hope you continue. and
Author needs to come in and like his own book 😀😁😎 hope everyone is having a good day and so are the others and I'm gone..................
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it is so bad like the frist is just blah and blah it is and it has the wrost charcter ever like sheeeh so yay dont read this it is just horrible and let me tell you about the swearing
Is this a joke? Like this is so bad that i think you puporsly made this horrible.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I have no idea how someone can rate this 5 stars…😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
It’s ok but you could put in more detail and clean up your grammar And the story will be just fine i hope you keep working hard and strive to grow your writing -from the dream author
60 percent of the chapters are author notes and not real chapters. Thats a big problem. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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This is bad I mean really bad. First the chapter that is used to make up the word count, I mean can you not save up a few chapters to get to get the actual limit. second of all your writing is atrocious.