摘要
When Scott is bitten in the woods his true nature turns out to be that of a wereeagle instead of a werewolf. (based on Talons from season 5)
The unique powers of his transformation allow him to become one of the most powerful alpha's alive.
Pairing: Scott x Lydia
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8評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
It's good hoping for the continuation. Please do finish it to complition. I really liked the minutes details from original story and keeping Scott as close to the original character. Scott's character development is good
I'm really interested this story. I want to ask about Talons season 5. Ehat is it? It is TV serial? Maybe game lol? Idk. I was searched about it, but couldn't find anything. I found Tv serial, that has 3 season. And player or character from game, league of legend.
I really enjoy the story. to be honest I really didn't believe I'd like the eagle part but I ended up really enjoying how it turned out and how you wrote it. please continue writing and don't drop this masterpiece. the grammar and everything else is good as well.
I think it's pretty good didn't realize you started updating again tho I hope you stick with it ............................................
good. keep it up. only a few spelling mistakes such as her and she and he but keep it up. can not wait for more. keep the chapters coming. :)
Just read 1 chapter, but the story looks promising, and the writing quality is good too, so keep writing Author, Good Work..................
Story is not bad but I cannot give you more stars for world and characters. I don't feel any unique vibes from them yet. It might change in future. I still have weird ideas about entire eagle powers. Eagles are not pack animals if I remember correctly and shapeshifters often adapt to their animal counterparts nature. 4 stars for WQ/ SOU. It's readable and I don't really care much about grammar. Story development: 3 stars. Some changes to original plot and I wonder if you make it interesting in future or just bland. Character design/World background: Not big changes for me. At least not at this point to give you some credit for them. I will come back to check if you continue original plot or add some new things to make this unique. Good luck.