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This is the story of an unfortunate person thrown into the world of MCU(AU Obviously) before Canon events and is given the power of Technomancy.
The man chooses to become a good samaritan and starts to prepare to protect the world he calls home now.
A/N :- First time author here so please have mercy.Constructive Criticism is always appreaciated.
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This story has a lot of potential. Please continue it. Also don't make the MC stupid to follow the Avengers and Fury to in their delusion and idiocy. I want to see the full/true potential of MC's ability. Please don't add harem.
for now it has great potential. haven't seen mistakes. and let hope mc doesn't suffer from hero complex. it would be great if author add pictures to his invention.
I've caught up (chp 21) and until now there was no (or very few) MC POV's, all of the FF consist on the reactions of other characters to certain events caused by the main MC, like Giga_Weeb said in a prior review, we know very little about our MC, writing quality is actually good for a FF, other than that I already gave my opinion, read if you don't mind an absent MC (literally his AI has more dialogues than him)
It just feels to rushed, it could have been good but you just rushed through the plot too fast, better luck next time [img=recommend][img=recommend]
There is literally nothing to read here, the character is supposed to be "thrown" into Marvel, but we start when he already has his resources, control over his "powers" (because I have no idea what his power is), and this so far is a reaction fic, there's no MC Pov, just the other characters/organizations reacting. Boring
Meh meh meh meh meh meh meh neh meh , história sem pé nem cabeça... , meh meh meh meh meh , história sem pé nem cabeça.... , meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh meh
Like a few other reviews has said the story suddenly starts at the invasion of New york with no information on how the *main character got there it feels like the story is missing alot of chapters and every chapter is from different Pov's the main character is in perhaps 10% of the story so far
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I thought this is going to be a good story, but instead we have a finally from the start. I don't understand, what's the point of all of this? Why should I read it?
Very powerful protagonist. The story was a little boring meh😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
This has amazing potential dont give up hope and please continue to update it's nice to see it from everyone's point of view.
in the synopsis it says the mc gets "thrown" into the mcu before Canon starts but it starts with him in the middle of the avengers movie and is still there half way through the chapters. like who is he, how long has he been in the mcu, what's his name, what does he look like, how did he get all these advanced tech.
Always a cool power to explore but story feels rushed, not a fan of stories that don't start from the beginning either. Too confusing, too many questions, and the author doesn't seem to really care about the spacing issue so I gave up pretty quick. there might be a good story if you continue but I don't really see the point after the first few chapters.
Great Story = All Stars 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟! Hope it does not drop midway, pray for the story to be completed with being great till the end!
I am someone quick to review...but the story is interesting(good) and off puting(bad). brilliant(good) and wish fulfilling (good/bad) so i hope it remais that way, because i havent seen someone actually using politics in mcu. i am big fan of politics and the author has used good politics in there, hope to see more
Love the way it’s written and the concept is super good I just think that having like 90% of the novel be from another character’s pov is weird other than that I’m enjoying the novel!
even tho it is a well writen story but there is a problem, the lack of MC. 70 chapters in and we know little to nothing about him. sure, you gave us little CRUMBS of info on him but after a few days i forgotten what was mc's existance is for. the longer i read the longer i got frustrated and dissapointed. pov after pov and still nothing. the point of a story is follow an MC that we can sympathize and follow them into their journey. and we get none of that. but side characters are now the mc's not the MC themselves. the "mystery of the MC" over stayed it's welcome. if this how the story is going to go then this story isnt worth your time............... technomancer in the mcu? more like, nothing in the mcu. you are good writer, author, but you messed up flow of the story, the story just got boring and cumbersome to read.
i stop reading when the author introduce another reincarnator. now we have a new reincarnated individual that seemingly an enemy to mc. sigh... well its good while it lasted.
The only thing I will say is writing quality in the start is a little off but it's great I like this approach The only thing that can ruin this fanfic is Romance Other than that it's amazing
It's so good, I am impressed at how good this is and how not cringe it is.
the writing grammatically and stylishly good but the plot is literally half missing. the story starts in a climax and we know nothing about the mc or his powers except that he is comically overpowered and flexing on everyone. the vast majority of what is currently written is POV's from side characters too. It seems like an exciting climax too, but it's hard to enjoy because the MC is too strong and we don't even know him. Even if the after the invasion the mc's plot kicks in it's still gonna be super boring after the invasion, which so far has just been reactions. 3 stars because it could be a pretty good story if it wasn't missing the first 100 chapters.