摘要
Teacher ko mahal ko.
Meet Abby, ang bored na estudyante palaging kasama ang mga lalaki.
Pero noong makilala niya ang kanyang teacher na si Mr. Derry na ubod nang gwapo at ma-sex appeal.
Simula noon, palagi nang pumapasok si Abby.
Sa request niya na "Teach Me,Teacher."
Tatanggapin ba ni Derry ang alok?
Samantalang, itong si Abby ay tatamad at bored sa buhay.
Makokontrol ba nila ang isa't-isa sa pag-ibig na pinagtagpo at bunga ng sex.
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2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Okay. Overall, it's a good effort. I'll give you that. Albeit having quite a generic plot, it was still entertaining for me. I only have one problem, the writing. Thankfully, I was able to understand the gist of the dialogues or events happening, but small grammatical errors, happening over a frequent read, gave me a hard time to fully bring myself to the whole story. I'm sorry, it is a major pet peeve for me and as much as I would want to invest myself in the story, it's just those grammar errors (that could have been easily edited), annoy and put me off so much. Again, it's an okay story, just please focus on checking your work before publishing them. those little errors are alright once in a while, but if there's plenty of them (especially when I first read the prologue) it can stop a lot of readers from getting invested.
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