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Naraku, a modern human, transmigrates into the world of Tales of Demons and Gods as a young master of the Sacred Family. He leverages his status to gather resources, trick, manipulate, and provoke others for his benefit.
He inherited a powerful template of the Otsutsuki God—a sophisticated scientific seal or glyph—that grants him the ability to accelerate his cultivation by gaining the world's karma, which he earns through arguments and acting like a heroic figure. He will possess a wide range of dark and demonic abilities, along with various cultivation techniques from Naruto and Bleach, and his powers evolve as he absorbs or consumes more.
Naraku is a scheming, strategic individual who uses trickery, cunning, and manipulative tactics to achieve his goals. Much like Aizen, he operates behind the scenes, pulling strings while presenting a more heroic front to gain karma and further his cultivation. With a grand and all-encompassing goal, he seeks to transcend life and death, pursuing immortality and divinity.
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Did anyone read the Synopsis? Care to explain in brief? And author, or translator, please shorten that abysmal synopsis... 2 or 3 paragraphs are more than enough to get the idea, you know.
Yo don't drop this fanfic. The story is good and I like the way it goes, except a story like cannon for a whole chapter was annoying. I don't mind the slow update but dont make a chapter the same as cannon storyline, its like telling us what we already know. (That part where Nie lie hunt those sheep)
a lot of useless chatter. The MC has no knowledge of the stories but acts as if he was aware of it. he has an asset but concretely it does not explain his behavior or his knowledge on elements such as cultivation. the author could have just added a prophetic gift to this level
The story is good and has potential, but there are some problems. 1 - The pace is extremely slow. One discussion lasted 7 chapters, and considering that the author posts 1 chapter per day, you need to wait a week to read the conclusion of a discussion. 2 - There are many inconsistencies. At times the MC acts as if he knows the whole story, at other times he acts as if he has no idea what is going on, like he doesn't know what is happening with Xia Ning'er's body, or the problem she has with Ye Zingun. 3 - Too many words and nothing added. Out of the 13 chapters, at least 3 chapters were just talking about Nie Li's past, to the point that at times I just started skipping everything that was written while looking for the next dialogue. My thoughts: The story has potential, it has an interesting system, but at the pace it's going, I would recommend waiting for it to have at least 30 to 50 chapters before you try to read it, since reading 1 chapter a day will leave you more frustrated than satisfied.