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摘要
Dying. A seemingly terrifying thing, a thing that a lot of people dread. A single soul, taken from its rightful place on earth, has been given a chance at new life. This soul however, is not the kindest most wonderful thing in existence... It's killed, it's kidnapped, its lied... It's betrayed, but it's been betrayed as well...
How will this soul spend his new time in a world he once read about? Will he become the deciding factor for the worlds downfall? Or the worlds fortune?
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TBATE: Abnormal One, but It's been rewritten. Changed into a new story, one that I find interesting and maybe fun to read.
My last project wasn't good at all, but you have to start somewhere right? For my first fanfiction, it wasn't bad. But it wasn't something I could look back on and say "Wow, that was actually pretty good for my first try."
And so, hopefully this new rewritten/new story, makes up for it.
Thank you for giving my story a chance even after the absolutely terrible first run. I hope you enjoy... :)
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Godlike, Simply immaculate, words can't describe the joy I feel when I read a new chapter, This book has given me hope in humanity again. Thank you, author.
Ohhhhhh niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
the rewrite is 100 times better than the old one, this doesn't feel like a fic written by a kid anymore and the story is more believable and mc isn't op immediately but grows slowly. this is great
Just by being a tbate fanfic it gets five stars Unlimited Blade Works! Unlimited Blade Works! Unlimited Blade Works! Unlimited Blade Works! Unlimited Blade Works! Unlimited Blade Works! Unlimited Blade Works! Unlimited Blade Works!
I was just browsing looking for some Tbate Fan-fics came across this one and I instantly liked it its great probably one of my favorites so good job author
I enjoyed it very much. good job Author! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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So far I’m enjoying this more than the other fanfic on this site both are good but yeah MC here is waaay better. …….. …….. …….. …….. …….. …….. …….. …….. …….. …….. …….. ……..
Just cause i dont like harems and i like this TBAT….………… .………wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaasshjsnsuzbsjsbdbdhshbshdhdndndosoisnxbxbdkzoixnrrododj
It got a reboot and Itz kool so 5 stars ______________________________________________________________________________________
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author, can I see the MC's performance please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
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Really good rewrite... Glad you decided to take writing more seriously even though there are a those who still hate on you. I sincerely hope you don't drop this and keep up the good work. Don't stress yourself out to much with making up lore since I know how hard that can be. Just have fun and make sure to stay consistent