摘要
"Is this the life that I can be proud of ?" This was the last thought Long Chen, The Imperial Dragon Prince, The supreme elder of the ice dragon clan in the immortal realm.
Long Chen who had turned from a young ambitious warrior to a cold, detached, neglectful old monster, was betrayed, was abandoned by the people who were once his comrades.
Long Chen whose familiar bonds had withered due to the river of time was choked with emotion.
Just When he thought that he had reached the end of his road, a mysterious entity interfered with his fate, making him transmigrate as a 16 yeard old debaucherous young master in the mortal realm.
With the birth of his new ambition to control his fate and of those around him Long Chen leads to a new conquest.
As the honor of the dragon crumbles the insidiousness of a demon is born inside of him. The Dragon Prince is dead, born is the Dragon Sovereign.
Watch as he sets off to conquers the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths.
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What you should expect
+Ambitious MC
+Fast Pace
+Fast cultivation in the beginning
+Clanbuilding
+Many Companions of MC who stick with him
+Ruthless MC
+Slow gradual romance
+Harem
+MC networking with people for common interests.
What you should not expect in this novel
-Long Separation
-Useless Companions
-Cockroach villains
-1D villains
-Loner MC
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This novel has one of the best world building ever. Not only do characters appear real and lifelike , but they are also moderately intelligent. For e.g how should the talentless son of clan leader be treated ? Most novels would bully him to death but guess here he(The predessor of MC is is the bully. Their rival clans have reasons to suppress them and it's not the mindless kill the mc on sight syndrome. Moreover despite MC being arrogant he doesn't antagonize everybody rather he makes both allies and enemies. It's also foreshadowed for him to cooperate with the black market.. Which is the kind of unscrupluos behavior i absolutely love.
Alright this is my first detailed review ever. This review is until CHAPTER 39. First of all i am regular reader of this book and have been starting this from the beginning. Writing Quality- The writing quality is great, there are some grammatical mistakes but the author regularly corrects them. The fluidity of the dialogues and scenes flows really well. The vocabulary is also quite fitting. Character Design- The characters are hella unqiue and quirky, everyone has their own desires and appear to be full of life. Author also includes slice of life moments to make them appear more alive. Updates stabilty- Not the best tbh although in the last week it has been 1ch/day. World Background- Probably one of the best ever. It is extremely well fleshed out and has many layers to it. At the same time there are no info dumps we slowly get all the relevant info. Even a simple city get's enough development. Plot- Very strong and mysterious. It does not fall into the trap of cockroach and predictable villains. The characters have selfish motivations so dont expect saving the world nonsense. Protagonist- The protagonist is like no other but if i have to describe him in simple terms think of like an immortal senior reincarnated as a mortal. A regular old immortal i mean. All in all this is one of my top 5 stories on this platform. Author sama dont you dare drop this beauty.
Shameless author here, I would rate my story 5/5. This is my first story still i rate it very highly, i know Not to toot my own horn but this is a really well-thought story with immense world-building and character design. I hope you can excuse the not so impeccable grammar in the first couple of chapters. The writing style improves as the story goes on trust me on this one
Though it sounds like it would be a good story I was confused once I saw that before he had transmigrated, he had been betrayed. Then in the synopsis tags and says " -lifetime companions" and "-no loner mc". This actually threw me off from wanting to read, how would you have an mc who's been betrayed by his closest friends and killed by them, reincarnate as a spoiled young master and have him go and still look for lifetime friends and not be a loner mc 🤣 ironic.
AS OF CHP 38 Nothing Seems Cringe, Story flows smoothly without logical flaws and disturbing immersion by something stupid. MC and Other Character Personalities are good as it is. The pace of story is superb , without filler and fast paced but not too much fast paced. World-Building is Simple yet Mysterious and things and clans are shown step by step. Wish Well to this Book, this should get more Views.
Well I don't have anything to say except that you should absolutely give a try to this novel. Its amazing 👌👌[img=update][img=update][img=update]
My first time reading something of this genre, I would like to say, the author has done a really good job here. The writing has became better by every chapter. So, it's a thumbs up for me. My best wishes to the author 👍🏻
For the love of god finally a cultivation MC.who is actually ambitious . I dont know whats up with these chinese mcs that remove all semblance of ambitoon from the MC
This is a real gem here . The readers feels the emotional devloment of the mc and even in the first few chapters it really hits diffrent ..................
writing quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ some words are missing in most of the paragraphs but it's not a big problem. story development ⭐⭐⭐⭐ 4 stars because you failed to discribe some of the scenes which caused me to have a hard time imagining things but over all it's good character design ⭐⭐⭐ all the characters are good except the female characters 😐
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This story is very interesting and also has a lot of detail in the world and the first chapter makes you intersted on where the story is going to go and the desion of the chartors and the overall indeep detail given to explain the MC motive is very good I will be sure to conture to read to see where this story goes from here
QILIN REALM-- THE WORD BUILD IS AMAZING. gotta say the writers worked really hard, the descriptions and the cover, the synopsis and the plot, the pace, its all commendable! i'd love seeing more content, tried my best to not spoil this stuff but id love to complete this book as soon as my tests are done with!
The author has indeed created a fast paced, intense and captivating story. Each well written and described scene sparks the imagination with what it intends to portray. An undoubtedly great read.
Long Chen has soooo much swagger. This takes the route of reincarnation into a trash guy's life and making him powerful. His dragon-ness makes it all the more cool. The story type might seem cliche but its the kind we all love to read. Keep writing.....I wanna see how he conquers the 9 heavens and the 7 seas
This story is intriguing. Review Proper. Writing Quality. It's a smooth read with all the narratives being clear and concise. Though there are a few g-errors here and there but nothing could be fixed by a little proofreading. Stability of Updates. Stable so far. Story Development. Fast-paced yet well-explained. It flows smoothly and it made one dive into the story as they continue to read. Character Design. The characters felt real especially the MC, Long Chen. Even the supporting characters' stories were written well and you could sympathize to them rarely well too. World Background. Since this is a cultivation story, from the items to the way of cultivation, everything is described neatly so far. Overall if you're a fan of Cultivation Story, give this story a try and you would surely like it.
I'm not quite familiar with stories like this which makes this book unique. I like the author's synopsis, short but straightforward. What a snyopsis about is selling your book in the first glance. I know this book would do this to other readers. Support the author!
Review as of chapter 14. Alright i have been following the story since the very beginning . Now let's get some basics out of the way it''s a very well written story with amazing descriptions and fights. Though there are some grammmatical mistakes they have been reducing as we progress. Moreover i noticed the auhor has corrected many of them. What i love about the novel the most is the protagonist if i have to compare him with some that can only be our beloved FANG YUAN from RI. Now don't get me wrong there are diffrences like how Long Chen can feel kinship. But the qualities that make them similar are. 1)Ambitious - Both Fang Yuan and Long Chen are very ambitious so you won't get your average Jiang Chen which has no shred of ambition whatever. Long Chen unapologetically pursuing his goals is a breath of fresh air. 2)They are both evil and they know it. A lot of protagonist like Su Zimo from ESK or Long Chen from NSBHA appear to be ruthless. IMO they are kinda okay. The author also tries to make them look the good guy by making the villains as humanely despicable as possible. That's not the case with Long Chen if you stand in his way you are a goner. He is by no means a hypocrite and understand the laws of jungle. 3)They both feel like they are in control. The last point is a bit hard to explain but lemme just say this no mc like Fang Yuan or Long Chen appear to be in complete control of the situation. It also stems fromt their arrogance that all the people around them are beneath them and mere chess pieces for them to manipulate. All in all author you better don't give up this masterpiecce.