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Tales of Demons and Gods: Story of Red Moon Immortal (Hong Yue Xian)
4.36 (106 評分)
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A xianxia fan dies in a very typical accident (applause to truck-kun) and gets reborn in the world of Tales of Demons and Gods as a member of the Hong Yue noble family. Realising that he was in one of his favourite xianxia novels, he decides to use his knowledge of the future to his advantage. Whatever Nie Li got and achieved he can do it even better, what Nie Li was stupid to discard or ignore our MC will accept with a smile. Let the story of the Red Moon Immortal (Hong Yue Xian) begin.
Warning: this is a harem novel, expect mature content. You have been warned.
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At the beginning, I felt a little apprehensive about this novel because of the whole taking stuff away from the MC thing, but It has been, actually, a fun read so far. He doesn't really take Ye ziyun away from Nie Li as she is still with him like in the canon. However, what its different is that the MC is taking all the other girls that Nie Li ignored in favor of Ye ziyun, such as Ning'er, Huyan Lanruo (mature pink-haired girl), Yan Xin (from the Alchemist guild), Shen Xiu (Sacred family-teacher of Nie Li's class), and many other girls that got forgotten alongside the original story. Just in case, he's not really stealing them because he just make them like him before even any of those could feel anything serious for Nie Li, apart from friendship, so It's not really stealing girls from him. As a result, I have come to like this story. If you are the kind of person that after reading the original webnovel or manga felt it was a shame that some girls get pushed aside or disregarded by Nie Li because he only focused on Ye ziyun, or even girls that completely disappeared after some volumes, then this is a good fanfic for you. Also, this is a 18+ novel so if you want some juicy stuff then start reading. :)
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Seriously stop writing a review that only contains "Harem" in it. It seriously made the story made like it was reviewed by a bot or the same person. Writing Quality 3/5: Too be honest, the only thing this story needs is an editor. as the story is readable even with the occasional grammar problems. Stability of Updates 3/5: I'M F*CKING HUNGRY FOR UPDATES, like seriously the amount of good original story has reached it's peak and now you can't find anymore good new ones. Story Development 4/5: LOVED IT. Seriously the protagonist isn't a beta wuss character and actually uses his IQ, Plus the cheats is op but not to the point of ridiculousness rather its growth potential is limitless and other than a few plot holes like (How did the main character find a demon beast with a god level to give to xiao ning'er) It's perfect. Character Design 3/5: The story heroine needs more background or rather more focused, not spread or a cardboard box personality one. World Background 4/5: Rated because of the overall story. Anyway, I Highly recommend you to read it.
A good TDG fanfiction. I'm waiting to see how you will develop it. The fast pace is appreciated. Not too fast so its a good point. I was kinda ticked off that he didn't take Nie Li's knowledge though I agree that he should let Nie Li do all this **** and let himself grow strong while enjoying his life. Too bad he can't get everything. Anyway. Happy and waiting to see what happens.
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The story, unlike other fics, is much better argued and treats its characters better. I think it's one of the few TDG shadow fics that are worth reading, a plus to this novel is that its releases are massive.
You have several problems with your novel in my POV. - No details, no worldbuilding, i remember that you started CHAP 9 i think to add some details but everying after that feel rushed, -Wish-fulfilment , i honestly have no problem with it if it doesnt prove to be a problem, here it is a problem, a big one, you focus tooo much on your fantasies that it becomes unberable. -The harem, dont get me wrong i like harems like every man out there, but you focus too much on it , instead of focusing 1 girl at the time, explore all the ideas of romance with her, build character or whatever, you just jump into wagon with 4-5 or whatever ( i stopped reading at 4th girl) and thats it, no character building, no nothing. Smut scenes may discorogues some readers but i dont really have a problem with them if they are necessary or to add some spice to your story, Here it fells that youre writing a story FOR smut scenes not creating a story WITH smut scenes.~ - Sorry english is my 2n language and im very tired. Best of luck and dont stop writing, only then you can improve.
I hope theirs a lot more chapters ...................... I hope when he's time to come back in his little harem he is now a father........have a son and daughter................
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This 5 star is for Yang Xin..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Warning: this is a harem novel, expect mature content. You have been warned. i find the novel which have warning and read them lol just haremmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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Please update faster 🙏 I really am craving for more! I agree with your way of chapter release, but I can't help it, can I? I'm too greedy for chapters! . . . . . . . ...
This story is great continue writing aourhors its has a lot of potential im starting like it plss update as soon as possible 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😅😅😅😅😅😅0😃😄😘😚😉😆😝😍😊😋😜☺😝😞😪😫😁😏😒😓😔😠😠😅😫😜😁😔😅😝
I've read until chapter 27. Good story for now. #harem #low key MC, #Independent, #supportive family #strong Mc #no system #possess a single cheat #business oriented EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP
I've read up to the 27th chapter and so far it's pretty good. Very few mistakes; Fast paced development; Characters have their own personality; The 18+ parts are nice and not excessive in quantity; MC's personality is actually pretty realistic (though quite horny XD) for someone in his situation. I don't really have any issues so far, except having to wait a month for more T-T.
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Tales of Demons and Gods: Story of Red Moon Immortal To the Author I can only say; Thank you. The description of the story and warning of it’s content was spot on. I thoroughly enjoyed this reimagining and just read it again for the second time. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading any other adaptations you endeavor in the future. Just as an aside, please bare with me as this is my only criticism of your work, I believe your character could have been just as successful. If he had been just a little older, about 17 going on 18. In the same Academy as a spoiled rich kid with no ambition that loves the ladies and reawakens just in time to turn a new leaf (without giving up on the ladies of course, who would). Again thank you for an enjoyable story.
Really good story. Good likable MC who's sensible and sly enough to not get into unnecessary troubles while building a nice harem. Plus I like authors approach to release a whole volume instead of a single chapter. Keep up the good work.
Its the best TDG fanfic . I have read //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Amazing not to slow not fast just right and with the author not forgetting anything they do. its also nice that the author answer questions and reads his comments
Writing Quality: 4/5 Nice Update Stability:4/5 Nice Story Development:3/5 Too much focus on harem members and not enough on ACTUAL STORY DEVELOPMENT. Also, not much that is new from TDG so three stars is already very generous. Character Design:3/5 Not a typical Japanese beat male. However, he is very inconsistent and so focused on women that it dilutes his personality. Three stars is a generous rating. World Background:2/5 You have to actually add to a world in fan fiction. I should have given a 1/5 here.