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摘要
[What do you desire?]
'To live a life worth remembering'
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"Congratulations, you have brain cancer and you might not live past 20 years old."
"......."
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Follow Alma Laune, as he tries to make do with what he has to live the best he can while avoiding the curveballs that life throws at him.
I have cancer? I will make do with it.
I won't live past 20? Make it 30.
My parents are dead? I will keep them in my heart and raise my younger sister in their stead.
I'm dead? That's it I guess. Had a good run though.
"An unfamiliar ceiling......always wanted to say that."
So, where am I? Shouldn't I be dead?
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寫檢討I love it. Simple as that. This was funny, involves serious topics of discussion, the guy (MC), is such a comedic person despite his situation. There is great detail involved Writing and carefully planning that goes with every type of the board. Overall I love it. What else does there have to be ?
It's only five chapters in, and the main plot hasn't started yet, but damn! This is amazing. The writing quality is amazing, has has little to zero flaws. Proper use of pronouns, grammar, sentence structure and paragraph spacing (no long ass unnecessary paragraphs). Vocabulary isn't limited as well, and this as shown to be an amazing read, just basing on writing quality alone, it's already recommended. It's only 5 chapters, so Stability of Updates is an automatic five until the future. The story is very interesting, and his 'powers' is still currently unknown. Author is good at giving sneak peeks, yet no fully explaining anything to give us readers more anticipation. There are proper interactions between characters, and the whole environment feels 'real' rather than some made-up story. A bit unrealistic, but that's the whole point of it being a fanfic! The characters aren't robots, and have emotions. Proper emotions and correctly used in certain situations, so no happiness at funeral or stuff like that. The characters are actually human. Interactions between each character is smooth, and the whole story line flows quite well. The mc is born in a modern day world, so I don't know whether he's gonna remain here, or be reborn in another world yet, so this is also an automatic 5 stars until further chapters. In all, this is an amazing fanfic that I find really interesting to read. If you don't like slow paced stories and tons of flashback, please do wait until further chapters, where the main plot would start before reading it. For those who enjoy people not being too op, have character development, positiveness, and an proper backstory, this is for you!
This will be a simple first impression review for now. I usually don't go for fanfics that only have less then 20 chapters, unless they are long chapters, but this one just caught my attention really quick. Honestly this is some of the best chapters I read in a while, and I really hope the author keeps it up. The synopsis mentioned the MC being dead, so I assume that at some point the story will reach that conclusion, or this may simply be the prologue to the story, or I missed something early on. Anyway, almost 5 stars to every category. I gave 3 stars to Update Stability, simply because it is kinda early to tell.
作者 LevisLKP
its awesome this is a amazing read theres only 7 chapters out but they are some of the best chapters ive read on this site! also a great song to listen to on this is Just the two of by Grover Washington Jr, it really add a good theme its mildly sad but also kinda uplisfting like this story a man who has a brain tumor trying his best to make the most of it and making sure his little sister has a good life before he dies