/ Fantasy / Tale Of The Unbound
摘要
The tale of a random person trying to find it's freedom. To find the key for the chain that is binding him. Yet the key itself is very obvious.
This is the tale of Akai Yuuji, the tale to find his/her Freedom.
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(Warning: This Novel contains GenderBender. If you don't like it then don't read it thanks!!)
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Cover is not mine and the story also have inspiration from Bishoujo ni Natta kedo, Netoge Haijin Yattemasu and other novels. Also please don't bully me.
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Credit to: miy_u1308 for the cover art!
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3評論
- 寫作品質
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寫檢討
The writing could be better and it could do with less stat pages; however, the plot is interesting and the characters show promise. Excited to continue reading.
Yo Author here. Gonna rate this a 4 because i think its worth this much. I appreciate any reviews for this Novel. I started writing because i just have nothing to do... and i wanna try to do it once. Well im gonna continue this novel until its done with the plot. There will be a sequel for it.. i have a lot planned for this novel so just wait for it. I dont care for powerstones, if u enjoyed it feel free to give this a powerstone but if u dont, then just dont.
everything good except for the writing style and grammer mistake-----------------------------------------------------------------------------