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摘要
A normal young student living with his parents dies. After meeting God, he goes to the world of One Piece to live the life of adventure and freedom he has always desired.
This is translated into English by Google translation. I write this fan fiction to improve my writing for my first novel. So if you see any mistakes or have any advice tell me.
Good reading.
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I didn't understand **** it's so confusing to read it. I am just giving 5 stars for the heck of it . So take care and you guys all have a great day because you deserve it. Enjoy
More than one person was getting reincarnated so I dropped it but if you like fanfics with more than one reincarnated character then I guess you will enjoy it? Idk
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The translation is bad and the strory is ok. Even though the story is not that good the translation just makes it worst. Like eVen if its cliche and the mc is to OP its Still fun to read sometimes but if tou pair it with bad translation its just to bad To read all the way.
I guess is a great story.....if you can decode it...i mean MTL is ....or at least i think its better...:D mainly here because of cover picture ^^
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Very good novel but needs more work in words writing correctly :)👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
La verdad es una historia bastante rápida,tan rápida que saltan de años en años como si no fuera nada. Las peleas han sido bastante normales pero si lo que quieres es leer una novela simplemente para desconectar esta es buena pero si no,existen otras miles de novelas que se la rifaron tanto en actualizaciones como en historia. Para el autor: está bastante bien,ponle más animo y adelante
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ITS GOOD AND ALL BUT IT LACKS DETAILS, YOU CANT EVEN CALL IT FAST FORWARD ITS JUST A FAST SKIPS LOL
Guy I was talking to my mom and she said she would be there at the same time I don't have ah phone again and I will be there at the same time I don't
the pic is the main reason people check this fic 😂 .....................................................................................................