/ Fantasy / Supreme Monster Hunter System
摘要
18 year old Kris dies saving a child, he gets hit by a truck (ERROR: CANNOT CLICHE HARDER) and his soul is sent across time and space to possess a recently deceased homeless boy.
This is my first real try in writing a story so bear with me as I flounder about trying to piece together a semblance of literature.
1K word chapter every day.
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A synopsis is very important, it's what we readers go to first. Your synopsis does not say much about your story. I don't know if it's just me but it feels incomplete. It does not at all make me curious to read the novel. The cover is cool, I like the monster.
yeah a nearly immortal man going through life again and again to gain even more power than he already has which by the by,pretty much puts most people in the trash category when compared to him as hes already op......good idea
Always love with tag system.. And the taming beast to be a big plus.. But im just not get used to the first perspective story.. .............. ...
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what will it take for you to add in more chapters of this good as f@ck book just a question for more chapters d@mmit more more more gosh darn it
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Well bec there are now only for now 4 chapters Il just say this. It is okay, it is just like any other system novel But just with a little more thought for the background And well hopefully it doesn't become a dead novel. Personal note: please don't make it a to overpowered system. Thank you
Really like this novel so far, will you keep udating? Do you have any kind of social media or discord I can follow to know the updating time? Thanks x.
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I really liked this story,and to be completely honest,i binged all of it in like 10 minutes,i am kinda sad that it has been discontinued,other than that,it is wonderful,and os recomend it to everyone
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Really love how this novel is turning out hes kinda like a lancer from fate/sky with his spear I love the direction the author is going with this novel and when Charlotte died I was legit upset because she was a loyal follower I hope they meet up or he gets a chance to revive her I also hope that the author keeps up with the story.
IN A NUT: MC, with some help from Truck-kun, is reborn is an unknown world with a RPG-SYSTEM which re;incs him again into another world(into a somewhat rich family) after achieving some noteworthy milestones in the former.. REVIEW: Although the first world was interestingly 'plain', the attempts made by the author was reassuring like the second world with fellow human interaction.. BUT! readers beware as novels are being killed like flies and the last update was 3 wks ago. There was no notifications from the author.. LET'S JUST THANK THE AUTHOR AND WAIT FOR MORE!!