/ Fantasy / Super Necromancer System
摘要
In a world full of caped superheroes, supervillains, and monsters, Aldrich is worthless. 95% of humanity has evolved to develop superpowers, but Aldrich is one of the rare few that has no powers at all.
Because of his lack of powers, Aldrich suffers relentless bullying and discrimination. Society looks down on him as a burden. He is reminded everyday that he is better off dead than alive.
Yet one day, at the height of his despair, after Aldrich is spat on, beaten, and broken, when it seems like everything is taken from him, a familiar screen appears in front of him: a screen from his favorite fantasy role playing game giving him the chance to wield the power he has only ever dreamed of.
[Welcome, Host. Choose your Class:]
[Class: Necromancer selected]
Watch as Aldrich rises from weak to strong.
From suffering to finding vengeance.
From standing alone to commanding undead legions.
From mere man to Lord of Death itself.
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this is an unbelievably incredible story!! the world building is so detailed and well done (both the real world and the video game world), the characters are extremely well written and balanced, and the system itself is something I'd definitely want to play (minus the mortal and immortal peril), and I find myself unable to put it down. If you like an anti-hero with questionable morality, this is going to be right up your ally. The MC is not your typical cookie cutter "hero", and he's never going to be. He's definitely not the villain of the story, but if you didn't know better it would be very easy to confuse which side he's on, and he has no confusion himself that he's definitely not good. He is cold blooded and ruthless. He's driven first by vengeance, second by the desire to kill evil at all costs, and THEN by the urge to help the helpless. I'd say hes chaotic good on a good day, but chaotic neutral might be more accurate. Or maybe just chaotic? The women in the story aren't blushing damsels in distress either; in an apocalyptic setting the people's characters change for the more brutal, and it's shown. I've been recommending this book to everyone. For my favorite books I like buying 2 copies so I can loan one out and read along with them at home, and I wish that this was published already so I could do exactly that!!
Unironically a masterpiece. I’v read up until chapter 80 and I can say with confidence that there is not a SINGLE chapter in this that I did not enjoy reading. The Mc is a well made character that has motivation and a personality. He has unique and charming subordinates who have interesting powers and dynamics with each other. The setting is original and gritty and it makes you excited to see what else is out there. 11/10. Only makes me even more sad that I’m broke and can’t read more of it.
PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP
Author's shameless review and telling what to expect: -Necromancer: lots of undead minions -Yandere FL -Anti-Hero MC: The MC is cold, calculating, and ruthless. He is not entirely evil, but he is not good a hero either. -OP MC: the MC starts out weak but grows strong very quickly -Superheroes, monsters, and cyberpunk setting
Author my only wish is for you not to put harem in this novel harem is dangerous for mental health for all the readers and don't put too much romance.I get it a Mc who doesn't pursue romance in life isn't a man but keep it down a little bit try not to turn him into a simp. I am writing this before reading your novel because I am truly against it.
Firstly, I would like to start off by pointing out that I'm making this review at the most updated chapter today, being 184. I was going to write this review earlier, but upon getting to a certain point, which I will soon mention, I delayed it to now. Additionally, I want to state clearly that I do enjoy this story. The only slight issues I have with this may be resolved in time - and, naturally, in another 200 or so chapters, I'll make another review, or earlier if things worsen. If you like an above-average intelligent MC, aware of their surroundings and how to act to get closer to their goal efficiently and effectively, not too hesitant towards being 'cruel' along the way, then this may be a great story for you. Personally, I appreciate a non-braindead MC, and with how the MC's story is portrayed, it's easy to understand where they are coming from. I'll now skim over the subtleties of the story before to refer to the negatives of this story. Writing quality is decent. Not perfect. I spotted a few dozen spelling mistakes, missing words, or simple, general grammar issues, but it wasn't major in the slightest; it's not something to be concerned about. I only rated this four due to the appearance of these in addition to - while some unique and exceptional use of vocabulary was wielded, it fell short of what I would consider perfect. Stability seems decent... In truth, I read the whole book in two days, so don't quote me... Story development - ... yeah. It's good. I have problems with it, but at a fundamental standpoint, for the most part, it's quite good. Good layers to it, and it has some thought in it. Character design is there, and while not extremely varying, and displaying quite stereotypical representations or repeated attitudes, it has sufficient variety. It's above average at the very least, and the characters appear to be thought about and properly given an appropriate sense of life, though it could do with adding some unique flavor to it, at least in my opinion. World background at this point seems good. The reason as to why I use 'seems' or 'appears' is just because, despite reading nigh 200 chapters, I feel like... the randomness of the story is what disrupts a proper review. I'm giving the most honest and accurate review I can, and thus, from this current point, it seems 'OK'. I'll now go over the faults... starting with this. Cyberpunk. Boku No Hero Academia. *Squish* You're going to see the guts of Cyberpunk's lifeless corpse compressed into this story. If you envision the two worlds above squished together... well, here you go. Quite honestly... maybe word for word... Of course, at least, that would be the case if the MC didn't exist in the world. But, in terms of world building for the current chapter, it appears that this is the case. You will see repeated phrases torn from Cyberpunk in this story as well as the classic, very typical hero/villain sort of thing. It's not difficult to conjure up; but, with the MC as an oddity, it felt a bit unique, and random to a safe degree. At least, until the point where I just recently arrived at, near chapters 180 or so. I feel that a notable portion of my discontent regarding this story is simply from the point that while randomness was lingering on the edge for a while, and was soothed by seeing some logic here and there, I feel like it's becoming a bit silly again with the introduction of more randomness. This may protrude upon grounds of being bias, but the addition of a bunch of additional random individuals with completely abnormal and random powers just feels a bit too much for me; kind of ruins the sense of the firm idea I had about this story. It would chop the score down to 3, but I do have some hope for it. This is also the point I want to emphasize; if this is explained clearly and makes actual sense instead of the author just squishing as much randomness in the story in hopes of making it appear mysterious, then the score could increase. Now, beyond mentioning the odd world building and background, I want to point out that if you have watched One Piece and you recall those fights that lasted... upwards of thirty 20minute episodes, expect that here. In my personal preference, I prefer quality over quantity. The obnoxiously long fight wasn't necessarily bad, however I felt that it was quite silly. I found some repetitive and dull, but I can feel that the author just wanted to make the existence backing that enemy appear very mysterious and powerful, potentially in counter to how strong the MC is becoming. I love mystery, so don't get me wrong, and I do actually enjoy some fights which end up lasting a bit longer than expected... but this time, it just didn't feel like something necessary. It felt like filler. Again, I can see some reasons behind it, but just personally at least, I feel like this would have been better shorter. That makes up for the gist of my review. Overall, I count this story as a 4 for the time being. Intelligent, yet not-too-unique characters; many appearing very typical, but compelling enough to get me to continue reading. A world with great potential... but currently lacking in just about every department until the sense of everything being pulled out of a hat randomly halts. Again, I enjoy mystery, but not randomness; they're different. The quality is decent and will prove sufficient for the vast majority. Stability appears to be fine. And story development... I'm hoping it sets itself on a good incline. Overall, a good story which, despite its flaws, was readable in a day or two through its author writing it in a way which I would consider captivating. I look forward to more chapters in the future, and I'll definitely send through another review after finding proper grounds for another review. Thanks for the story, Author.
I hope the Author doesn't drop it .I really loved it . I also hope it's not like the other magic based Novel where the mc suddenly uses Melee. It would be nice to finally have a pure class mc. Have the mc use dark attack magic.
I like it I hope the author dosent drop and maybe do a mass release cause I really enjoyed reading these 10 chapters and I think it has a lot of potential
Hey, author-kun, are you still alive??? It's been MONTHS since you last updated your novel! What, is it completed?!?!! ┻┻︵ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ︵┻┻
Read 40 chapters but the story is great. It give me a feeling this novel is going to be a bit like overload. But story has been amazing until now including the grammar. I just hope the author won't drop this story.
This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. it is very unique and I am excited to see what our mc will do in the future [img=recommend]
I like this author's work. The reason for the 1 star for update stability is that this novel will likely share the same fate as all his other ones. Abandoned. He hasn't finished a single one as far as I can tell. it's been months since the last update. Don't hold your breath. It's incredibly likely that chapter 444 is the end of the road.
Like the buildup of the characters and how the story keeps certain elements that make it feel realistic. World building overall is superb. Not sure if this effects how other view the protagonist buildup due to obvious elements of a certain game *cough* that is involved. To me, it makes me love the story more but I’m not sure if others can follow the gaming elements introduced. Overall, I’d give this a solid 4.8 ⭐️ with solid releases and how it captivates the readers.
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
bad do not read after chapter 155 the mc becomes stupid instead of him to be grinding he is wasting his time trying to enter the hero agency I would love it if he has maintained a mysterious persona
A very interesting novel indeed. Despite the Necromancy Theme, the MC Aldrich falls under the Chaotic Good alignment imo that is well thought about. His personality is strong and unwavering boosting his talent with a hardworking attitude rather than just a cheat ability. I mainly fell in love with the Author's writing style and deep versatility in crafting Words and Grammer. While he doesn't go into much details about the visualities as I do, he explains the deep mechanics of his world pretty much from the start without annoying the reader with any degree of mystery which is opposite of what I do. But the well crafted action scenes and the and the to the point storytelling gives an easy trip to any reader. The World Building is another thing I find extremely well crafted in this story even though it is simple and easy to understand. The Alter Powers and Biology oriented take on them is something fresh but not completely new in my scope. Still, very well done. What I find a bit shaky is the idealistic orientations of certain characters. I am glad that the author focused on Just/Corrupt troupe rather than the Good/Evil usual one but some characters were a bit boastful of their ideals which took them too many lines of dialogue to speak them out. As for the fun rating, this novel gives me a stunning 8/10 on my funmeter with all the hidden and sneaky references here and there. However, the main Famale Lead who is a vampire death knight falls under the same category of Ainz/Albedo love genre but not to the point of extreme yandere, this makes her fun but not too fun imo. All in all, a pretty much solid piece that I recommend.
dont bother picking this one up,its been abandoned with no word from the author on any sort of conclusion or what happebed
Authors like John_Doever are somewhat rare. Being able to expertly mix up two different genres is no easy feat. I love how some of the so called "heroes" aren't actually heroes. It adds realism to the story. The world background is a mixture between fantasy and science fiction which is a rare but fine combination of genres. I hope I can find other novels like this one. Author, your knack for writing is spectacular.
Story overall is average, but in essence is just a twist on my vampire system. The writing is not bad, and it reads well. The characters are kind of hit or miss. you've got a vampiric death knight that is in love with the MC, but it's presented in a cringy manner. The MC is logical and mostly unemotional to the point there really isn't any character growth, in fact he sets off on a path to give up all his humanity. The MCs' companions are all reserected minions from monsters to fallen heroes. I've read to chapter 48, and I believe I won't be going any further. The story is fine for a light read, but personally I didn't find it engaging enough go any further. overall not my cup of tea, but for those looking for an offshoot of my vampire system or my great demon system you might like this book.
Superman vs Necromancer, now thats something that has never been done before! Enter Earth 117 years after superheros super villains and monsters started roaming it. Our powerless mc joins a cliche powerless people are useless school for the psychotic, where some of the local imates (school kids) do their usual role. in steps our mc with his favorite necromancer system and a edgy new look, his goal? Vengence. He is positioned to take advantage of no one being familliar with whats going on with him, his magic spells and doom stack of undead. Cant wait to see how he fairs agaisnt a flying indestructible laser equiped human missle, that deals both fire and bludgeoning damage (which hes weak to).