/ Anime & Comics / Successor of god
摘要
Long story short, Dave was a guy who everybody looked up to he was the richest man to live he was a scientist who made the cure to cancer but then he died, and got a chance at a second life, but this life is more interesting as he gets to travel to Anime worlds while in the process getting stronger as he is the Successor of THE GOD and for that to happen he needs to be strong.
I don’t own Naruto all credit to that goes to their creator.
All I own is the MC.
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-- 推薦票
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the first chapter was interesting while the later parts are like catching waifus. I mean in the first chapter he was like "I don't get in a relationship because I was busy" but then second chapter is like "I'm gonna capture all the waifus" it is actually a big change to what I thought the mc is like so I dropped this novel.
Writing quality- it's about at the level of a 3rd grader, the english is there but there's no grammer the dialogs are horrible and the author changes thing like every 3 chapters to the point you have no idea what's going on..... Story development- there isn't one, it's just a rehash of the cannon even tho mcs a god but the author says he doesn't want him to be to op? but whatev it's his novel character design- I give 1 star because author changes stuff about the character based on other people's desires, which to me shows he didnt put the effort to fully flesh out his character before he started writing Updating stability- it's pretty decent for we novel, but I expect it to be dropped soon, not much you can do with a story like this, author san will burn out after he wrecks a few worlds world background- does not exist in this novel I would give it 0 stars if it was an option overall? not worth your time... find something better
Hero is too op and I didn't know how you make more than 100 chapters without: catch all waifu. Nothing nothing nothing nothing nothing nothing nothing nothing nothing
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you earn this brotha also do me a favor and shout me out for donate power stone one time in next chap good luck mate
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