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摘要
On Naruto's first day as Hokage, he receives Hinata's first kiss. Naruto's reaction is: "I'm sorry, it wasn't intentional, I thought I was dreaming..."
Naruto: "What? Tomorrow is the graduation exam?"
"Well... Does that mean Mizuki wants me to steal a forbidden jutsu scroll?"
"Hold on, I'll go buy a camera... No camera? Then I'll buy a copying scroll. No money? Hmm... Let's see if I can borrow some from Hinata..."
Disclamer:
Forgive me if I am merely a mediator in presenting this work in a different language. I appreciate the beauty and wisdom found in the original writing.
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寫檢討
This story has really good potential. If it keeps the same quality, sticks to the synopsis, and the author keeps it up, this might be one of my favorite Naruto FF's💯
Story wise this is like a 1 star because of the Chinese fic nonsense like "soul power"and "cultivate". The writer can't even get the plot order correct. Sasukes beat 400 of naruto shadow clones straight out the academy and naruto feeling the pain of his shadow clones which both sound stupid, half the time it just sounds like the author wasn’t thinking. Translation wise it's a 5 star there is little to no mistakes and pretty good grammar too.