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After watching the film "Jumper," Leo developed the ability to teleport. It was, unbeknownst to him, simply the beginning of a much bigger adventure. He traveled to the Marvel Multiverse, where the Avengers exist, after his power grew out of control. But the Avengers were merely the beginning of his journey through the MCU's Multiverses.
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I thought it was a new story, but you only changed the name of the protagonist of a novel called "Marvel Began Shuttling the Heavens" in MTL, even the chapters have the same name, I already said that this novel was familiar to me :T
I didn't read a single world, apart of the synopsis, but I give the 5 stars only bcz of the idea of the fic <3
Written by an idiot, translated by an idiot, for idiots. And since i need 140 words, I'll just write very irrelevant things right here that have absolutely no meaning whatsoever.
It seems to be a translation of a Chinese fanfic, I can't be sure without the author confirming it because it's well translated. Unfortunately the characters seem to act based on Chinese society, even in the US, other than that the symbol used for lines (eg 'speech') is commonly used for thoughts in most novels/fanfics and this makes everything a little weird. Writing isn't very natural either. The story isn't engaging and doesn't feel realistic to read. It feels kind of artificial (it's hard to describe the feeling) it's not a quality issue but a writing style issue.
after reading i will not continue reading the mc is illogical... it could be better .
MC is very dumb and pathetic. This just feels like that the author is writing just for the sake of extending a barely thought out story and increasing word count with useless things.
I thought this was an original at first, but the moment he was described as "Asian", I instantly knew this is Chinese fanfiction reskin that the uploader didn't even put enough effort to hide the fakeness. I thought this was an original at first, but the moment he was described as "Asian", I instantly knew this is Chinese fanfiction reskin that the uploader didn't even put enough effort to hide the fakeness. I thought this was an original at first, but the moment he was described as "Asian", I instantly knew this is Chinese fanfiction reskin that the uploader didn't even put enough effort to hide the fakeness.
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-The updates are good considering you have it set to a countdown…. -The story is kinda good -But the worst is the Chinese elements that don’t translate well into English Americans do not act like this at all…. It’s confusing and frustrating… We don’t call an old man a Respected Elder -You get what I’m implying -The story idea is great -You need to get an English born editor that’s fluent in Chinese or your native language to translate it and fix it into an American or English grammatical way of speaking. -Thanks for the Story
Really bad, don't waste your time! ..............................................................................................................
This story is from very perceptive and I like it this is going to grow something more and something else. Keep this story on the road this is a gem as we explore the multi verse with you finding different possibilities because multiverse is infinite and there are many surprises coming your way. Love it...❤
The first step to doom in marvel fics are the mc's getting their noses in everything unrelated to them........... Haa I really want one good marvel fic
chinese translation , nomatter how good translations are you can always tell from the stupid Chinese saying and idioms that come in every one. the chapter order are sometimes mixed , sometimes,especially the mc is called a she instead of he , its a interesting book but I dislike the typical Chinese mc , he disappeared for 3 months on his semi girlfriend, she waits for him , he returns and says hi then goes off to train for another month yet the girl is still with him , gives me flashbacks to scum che from ATG
this is a translation of a cn marvel fanfic called "Marvel Began Shuttling The Heavens" this was actually not that bad when I read it on mtl site but I dropped it when I got to 1000+ chapter as I don't really like an mc with no lovelife 😂
hrufhfjfjfjfjfjjfjfjfjfjyyyyyyyy uruyy i can i please do me and my dad are so cool 😎 thanks to my family i i cant and my brother in north africa thanks so very good to be a happy life love love and thank love love hrufhfjfjfjfjfjjfjfjfjfjyyyyyyyy uruyy i can i please do me and my dad are so cool 😎 thanks to my family i i cant and my brother in north africa thanks so very good to be a happy life love love and thank love love
Mediocre. Nothing bad nothing good. I get its a translation so the grammar aspect is going to be a little off but still, the writing itself is barely average. Main character is boring, premise while interesting is not well explored. Read as a time filler but theres nothing to get invested in.
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Unfortunately it's a translation of a Chinese novel. It was translated well the problem lies in the interaction of characters, they feel off because it's in USA but everyone acts like they are chinese or at least from a chinese novel.