/ Anime & Comics / start as a thug in ptj verse (lookisme and Questism…)
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Synopsis: An ordinary young man on Earth ended up with no explanation in the PTJ verse. He became a secondary character named Hajun Gu after the latter lost consciousness. What will the new Hajun Gu do in this new world opening up to him?
Author's Note: I'm finally deciding to write a story based on the PTJ verse and please, I would like your help to correct any mistakes since English is just my second language. Also, this is my second novel, so I have a bit of experience and also the image used for this fanfic is not mine (if the owner wants it I will remove it)
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寫檢討VERY glad to see a new lookism/questism/manager kim (maybe) fanfic, has a good start and the protagonist isn't cringy or an idiot so I have high hopes
So far this is the best PTJ fic i ever read,great development and solid story line,so i hope you can continue writing this Masterpiece because i really really enjoyyyy it😊😊
Very solid fan-fic, there really isn’t anything I can criticize so far. Grammar is good, story has it’s own sense of direction, and the mc acts logically. Ironically I like this story 10x more then the original Questism. Definitely worth the read, can’t wait to see the eventual interactions between mc and lookism characters.
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揭示劇透Keep it up, boy! no matter how stupid and forced the story is, I like it! special respect for the choice of character, but it seems to me that only his name remains from Hajun, he is not at all similar in personality to the original.
Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Updating Stability ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character Design ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ world background ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ A good story.. and good job for the author.. I'm at the latest chapter currently and I can say that's it's been great so far.. I'm just a bit disappointed since he conquer Gangbuk too fast.. well i just hope the author don't drop this ..
So far I'm liking the pacing of the story hope to see more. I'm wondering if Hajun will learn from a king of generations in order to become much stronger.
bro plz don t drop it i love ptj fanfic i beg g you there are rarely any ptj fanfic jkjnnnkkkkkkkkkkkknklllllnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn