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摘要
[ Reboot of my Story, Source: A Multiverse Travel ]
Many people have asked questions like how it all originated...
What came first, the chicken or the egg? Was God the one who created everything? Are we the product of a species that gradually adapted to the world?
Welcome User to Source, here you will be able to discover the answer that so many wise men have been looking for but it will be a hard road... full of dangers in every corner where not only your intellect will be put to the test, but also your power, your will and your preparation.
Are you lucky enough to make it to the end? Are you brave enough to take the first step? Can you find the strength to keep going?
That... only you decide... advance or give up...
Only you will decide how far you want to go...
Welcome to Source... Do you want to start your journey?
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WARNING : hey guys I'm using Mobile and my laptop was having shorting problem and I don't know when I'll be able to fix it
So there will be grammar and spelling mistakes
Hope it'll be readble
UPDATE SCHEDULE : NOT FIX
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Original Author : GenoXX
Original Name :: Origen (Espanol)
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Mc has a female body and face. MC is supposed to be an MC with powers, he easily kills dozens of zombies... but he saves Shido, even seeing how Shido sacrifices other students. Shido hints that he will cuckold Mc, but MC does nothing and continues to help him. MC acts like a goofy shonen protagonist. This story should not be #harem. MC is too dumb and beta.
I would prefer a frickin evil scum MC over this ret@rd saint MC. First 30 chapter, there was a jerk who tried to r@pe the heroine, and that guy will 100% cause a disaster later in the canon world, and our stupid MC just let that guy live and even give him an vehicle for no logic reason. And then the next chapter MC slapped his own face himself by killing some npc and giving a speech " you should kill people who have ba intention toward you when you have a chance". And he tell a woman about his system and mission, that they are in a fiction world, knowing that will lead to her death unless she become his harem. When all he had to do to avoid that was a simple lie.
You idea is about MC , background & world. But the grammar so irritating that no one reviewing. Also some characters personality change or develop I don't know specially shizuka, Saya , Saya parents.
The MC: His personality keeps shifting at a seconds notice, one second he's all serious and broody the next he's just spitting everything of importance. Next the choice of worlds lacks severe creativity like what's the point in going to the IS world when it won't bring him any advantage in strength whatsoever except girls rather if he went to worlds like Djinn, HxH, DxD, Sister's Testament or even the world of blazers. Atleast they'll grant some advantage. Writing quality is fine I guess but the initial phase is just plane horrible. Story development, involves unnedded plot points even from the perspective of a slice life fanfic which it is not. A multiversal fanfic should be a little more fast paced. Character, their personality is all over the place, one second a character is a wimp and in a day he turns into a charming confident Chad. Update, had been consistent but lately not. Overall, got some potential and the degree of quality of work can be severly improved.
MC join IS academy but doesn't have an IS prototype and I feel disgusted that MC kiss a boy in disguise. RUINED. I thought his first time would be Houki and this boy in disguise ruined my fantasy. ffk
The fic is not original, it is a translation of a Spanish fanfic......................................................................................................................................................
I don't know how to write a review so, THE ONLY THING THAT I DON'T LIKE IS THAT THE INTERACTION TO ALL GIRLS WHEN THEY MEET IS TOO FEW AND IT WILL DIRECTLY GO TO ANOTHER WORLD (I hope there's a chapter focusing to each girls) . It's like you focus to much on the story of each world and has little time for bonding to all MC and his Harem. Overall It is Great 😇💯 this is my own opinion and I'm not good at English.
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story is generic and plot is abit bland. the system is actually unique which i really like. story starts real good but for most part it gets drag and end up being predictable. There are lots of times where you will question why he would do things that can solve in a simple manner. mc do not plan at all, but try to look like he has one. his a common shonen protag where the world revolves around him instead of him affecting the world and doing things to make the story progress like most multiverse traveler. grammar is bad it gets to the point where its annoying and you just wanna give up reading. best you get a proof reader or use grammarly. hope it gets better.
It was great in the setup but I hated the world's you chose so not going to read any of it..................................................
Story is okay ,it could have been better if anime choices were good,most of the anime chosen are not rundown onesThere are many flaws in writing MC character design,I had a feeleing that author was not sure what character design to choose for MC but as the story progress he had made many changes to it which made it a little bit of hodgepodge
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Well written, but too many girls in my opinion. Kinda off putting, first world finished, and he is coming out with almost every female character(popular ones). Personally, I think I would have enjoyed it if it was like 1,2 girls per world. But that’s just my personal preference. If you don’t mind a harem that’s massive, good read ish. Some might have problems with the mc but mc in my opinion is like a 3.5/5. Better than average.
man I really want to suggest you to stop publishing new chapter and edit the old one, i mean before it's still good but now I am confused over who is speaking, what the conversation or scene is... and so onthe universe seems interesting but I can't continue because of how it feels like MTL so until the author edit the chapters i wont't read further in
It’ seems like I good story if I could actually read it it, I mean translation + random cuts make me burn calories while reading this
it was a good book but as some stories it can go from good to bad real fast so if you like somting like dat is under your one decision . .
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wandered why am I wasting my time on this. (You got tricked)