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摘要
Kenshin is a boy who doesn't have a Gnosis.
He doesn't have the ability to rewind time when he dies.
He doesn't have memories of another world.
He definitely, DEFINITELY, doesn't have a system.
To be fair, he doesn't even have a Vision.
And yet, even he has something that makes him unique.
He can see souls.
NOT A FIGHTING FIC (Not so sure anymore), WEAK MC (still true). You are warned, don't complain later.
No NTR or yuri, just so you know.
I own nothing from this work, as there is no brain behind it.
The image is, obviously an AI generated one, this time 'mine'.
Lastly, Patreon. Yes, just my name. patreon.com/ARandomMob
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This is one of the best genshin ffs I have read. The content is original, the humor is gold and the story got me hooked. It was sooo good that for the first time ever, I felt compelled to give review right after finishing the most recent chapter and I have close to 1000 hours of reading. Great job Author and keep up the good work.
The story has no real problem per say the update and grammar is good the only problem is the mc to put it bluntly he acts like an idiot he is constantly rude despite being raised in a shrine full of shrine maidens and he lacks common sense while this may be attributed to him being young the way he acts despite living in a place with probably the most polite people is slightly annoying I personally can't stand such characters so until I can get used or tolerate this kind of attitude better I'll probably stop reading and come back on a later date despite all that good work author keep it up
This fic is tied for the singular best fanfic I've read on this platform. From the slightly unhinged comedy, to the actually serious moments, I loved every second of it. This made Inazuma as a whole so much more interesting, and honestly makes the Shogun's decisions seem even worse than in-game. Now that the fic (or at least the Genshin arc of the fic) is over, I will immensely miss Kenshin's antics and I kinda wish we got to see more of his family before it ended. But author, know that, from the bottom of my heart...
Another Genshin Impact fanfic where the protagonist has no vision (they keep piling up), and this one is worse since it's not about fighting and the protagonist is a coward.
one of the best genshin fanfics that ioever read every chapteri Burst my guts laughting
Honestly, what started as a fun fic. With comedic elements turned into such a beautifuly told story. This story alone raised my standards a couple of levels. Author thank you very much for this masterpiece, and I shall await your reuturn with more.
HONEST REVIEW!! First thing first I want to thank the author for bringing this amazing story to life. What I thought was a brain rot crack fic turned out to be genuinely one of my favorite stories I came across on this app. World/Charater development: the world is Genshin but where many would start at cannon with lumine/aither arriving and use already existing personality’s to create a plot the author started Years before cannon and beacuse of this was able to flesh out many character personality’s and make them feel as real as anyone else. Each person introduced feels alive with backstory’s that match there personality’s to the point where not once did it feel out of character even if it they are diffrent from cannon. My thoughts on the MC: I thought at first I was gonna have a hard time likeing a weak mc since I generally like strong/op mc’s but to my surprise from the start I couldn’t NOT like the mc. He was funny, likeable and smart about the way he did things. In the beginning he was immature and funny, then he became a reliable person who pranks others, and after that he became mature but still kept his mischievous nature and it didn’t feel overdone. I never once thought I didn’t like the mc and there were many times he surprised me. Even though the mc was weak he didn’t really feel like it, anything that he couldn’t beat with strenght he would outsmart and even if he couldn’t win he was never put in a truely disadvantageous situation where he couldn’t work his way around with a little help. The mc IS NOT A REINCARNATED PERSON! He is just a normal boy born with a unique ability that shaped who is was. And I loved it. Story development: Before starting the story the author warns people -Mc is Weak till around chapter 90+ -This is a crack fic/ Slice of life with little to no fights until chapter 90+ They didn’t lie it is genuinely like that till 90+ but it is not bad you barely notice how weak the mc is because he never lets himself be in a truely bad spot and if needed has backup from powerful people. From the start it is a crack fic like we were told and it never truely felt to be too much. The author mixed crack with plot so well that you are never bored with either. Even when you hit chapter 90 there are still crack moments you get to enjoy with the new action added into the story. This story never left me bored and always added new elements to keep the reader interested. The mc’s power while not strong at the start felt special and he never felt like a simple background character. Now 90+ he can use said ability to become a genuine threat to whoever tries him and I love it. The shift between weak to strong doesn’t feel unearned. Everytime he got a small power up it was either through his own effort or his sacrifice. OVERALL: I loved this story and I will wait as long as it takes for the author to continue. Genuinly my top 10 in this app.
As a kid-mc hater i honestly didn't expect this novel to be good but have to admit the writing is very entertaining, specially considering how the mc has no goal (crafting a body was a temporary one) and just exists to be annoying, gave me some Xu Que from The Ultimate Scheming System vibes (Xu Que is annoying because of the system, i know) But sadly i'm dropping it because i'm not into yuri, yeah it may be a just harmless joke (a suspiciously recurrent one) but i'm not taking any chances. Also sorry but i can't respect the choice of "trading" his eyesight to create a body for someone who's not even from his family, i'm sure he will recover it later but lets pretend he doesn't, no matter how you put it, he's blind and will remain blind until his last days, meanwhile the god will be enjoying life.
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Wow! this took three days, even during work, to read this masterpiece? The adrenaline, excitement, and comedy are a perfect blend. Out of hundreds of fanfics, yours has blown me away. Your characters are so vivid – it's like I know them personally. And your original protagonist? Absolute perfection. The ending was a roller coaster, and that twist? Genius! The way you captured the story, the characters, their relationships... it's masterful storytelling. Please don't leave us hanging – this fanfic you've created deserves so much more!
I am writing this review 67 chapters in. Now, let me say this in a few words. This book is Top-tier. It has one of the best world building, accurate character depictions and a very fresh take on Genshin Impact. I will be hard pressed to find a better fic than this(Not just Genshin).Without necessarily having an OP MC, this book still is able to be a partial wish fulfilment fic, while also having the right smidges of humour and serious moments. The MC feels useful in his role and not just dude out to mess up the world. The MC takes his natural place in the world, while also making himself feel like a true part of the world, and not an Add On. It is my sincere request the author to continue this fic till its completion, whatever it may be.
Really good, like super duper good. I have no knowledge of genshin coming into this but still thoroughly enjoyed, just keep a wiki page open in another tab for misc info or pics :)
I don't usually review but this one deserves it for me it's the best genshin fic that I have read .....................................................
I know I'm a pain, but I will write it here too, so you are warned. This is NOT a fighting fic, despite what it sounds like, he won't fight until chapters 90+. It's supposed to be a fun fic, with some exaggerations with dramatic purposes. I am writing chapter 96, so I won't be able to change many things even if I want to. If you still decide to go forward, enjoy.