摘要
"Bring peace and you can come back home"
Those were the words I heard so that I could go home.
Although a difficult task, I must do it at all costs...
I will have to decide between difficult choices, which will require strong determination...
I just hope that I can still look in the mirror after this is all over.
*Note:
-The cover image, as well as any image in the story, does not belong to me, it belongs to the respective artist/designer.
-Any character in the story does not belong to me either, it belongs to the respective creators and artists.
- The history of "Avatar: The Last Airbender", does not belong to me.
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Decent novel with garbage upload schedule. Average grammar, randomly plummets at times. Enjoying the plot but the MC is immensely paranoid and 90% of each chapter is him having internal monologues where the authors attempts to make him come across as smart and calculating. When in reality…the situations are never that deep or confusing and hes just doing WAY too much. Other than that I’m still here for the ride. Nothing has really happened in 6 chapters so I cant say much about world building.
Really good fanfic, just needs more chapters but that comes with time as long as it's not dropped.
You have received my attention. I hope it can be sustained. My short plea to you, continue doing what you do....
Another interesting story from my favorite author. keep up the good work. ...............................................................................
I need more....,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,,.,.,,.,!,!,,!,!!!,!,!,!,!,!,!!,!!,!,!,!!,
En mi humilde opinión parece que el autor tiene pensado en sentarse más en más relaciones entre los personajes que en batallas, bueno teniendo en cuenta que el protagonista ya está op, tiene sentido, es una buena historia y los capítulos son lo suficientemente largos para estar satisfecho jajaja. PD: necesito más capítulos.
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This is a great avatar fic, it’s the first time I’ve seen something remotely similar to it. I’m hoping to see character growth in the future as rn he’s a little under developed, but it’s generally just fun and interesting to read.
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Good. Great spelling, grammar and punctuation. The chapters are long, and the story is developing at a good pace. I haven't seen ATLA, but have read a few fanfics. It's easy enough to follow with minimal knowledge of the world background. The harem was revealed at the beginning as 3 girls. So it isn't too large. TL;DR Read it. It's good. Only negative is that there isn't more.
this is a good story ideea and premis but i recomand adding tags if you want it to gain more popularity and also i dont think it should have romance
If someone is looking for a story with good spelling this is a very good story and about the characters if I can say something about the new Zuko is that I like that it is not the typical prota that goes to a world because he died and does not mind reincarnating because he has no friends or family and it seems very tender that his main motivation to save the world is to return to his daughter now if we talk about the world is that of avatar but with some changes eg: Azulon is alive and it will be interesting to see how these changes deviate the course of history that the prota knows, conclusion is a very good story.
I‘ve read the other Book of the author and it was amazing, so i have high hopes for this one and as far as i can say it‘s pretty good, so try it out you won‘t be dissapointed
I just want more Avatar fics..................... ..........................................................................................