/ Anime & Comics / Snow mage of the Clover Kingdom
摘要
In a world where magic dominates and corrupt nobles seize control all that matter is strength, friendship,and willpower.
No harem
No sadist evil mc
Not a issekai
This a created character I made for fun because other black clover fanfiction are just harems or evil crazily op MC's enjoy my book or no cookie.
標籤
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4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
At the start the story is nothing new for a black clover fanfic but as story Progresses the writing get better and more interesting . The Mc joins the silvereagles instead of the Black bulls which is so rare in this fics. plus mimosa is the FL (as of right now ) which I love hopefully it’s no harem , fingers crossed . hope this goes far.
I just started chapter 4 so this may be too early of a review, but I can't deny that i am enjoying this story, I'm not gonna go into depth yet cause I'm only on chapter 4, but I'm putting this here for the author, so he can become more motivated to make more chapters, i truly hope this will make it to the end of black clover, I know it may be wishful thinking, but a man can dream
The writing is good but it has a lot of grammar errors. The overall story is amazing and I love how even though the MC is powerfull he’s not completely broken like most MC’s are. I understand that the author is going through a difficult period at the moment of me writing this but I just wanted to say to anyone who what’s to read this that the story is amazing and I highly recommend and encourage you to read it.
The quality of writing needs to be improved. I hope the author could improve as the story progresses. The things that author needs to keep in mind is try to go for shorter paragraph which makes smartphone users for easier read. Also try to express the characters feelings as right now it feels bland and mc looks like a machine. Also try to describe the new background. The fanfic is good I hope the author can further improve it.