摘要
Edited Version: Picking it back up after 2 years... I changed a lot of details. It's better to reread if you read the old version as the new version is muchhh better.
Piercing sounds echoed from all sides, abruptly replaced by an eerie silence—a daytime nightmare arrived. A gentle smile consistently adorned the face, yet a hint of sorrow lingered in the eyes.
As the child maneuvered the claw, Lu Xiyun stood tense, both hands pressed against the glass. His eyebrows were slightly furrowed, and his unblinking eyes were fixed on the moving claw, displaying intense concentration.
"Big brother, do you want to play the claw machine?" The big brother tilted his head and stepped aside.
Witnessing this scene, someone found it amusing, and a small laugh resonated.
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Read more than C2, so I can say it's an enjoyable story. The characters are believable and so are their situations. The writing is solid, with good pacing that makes the reader want to go to the next chapter. Great stuff. Keep writing. 👍
I enjoyed reading this book so I added it to my library [img=recommend][img=recommend] The Chinese setting in this book was so realistic, everything was so detailed and well-written. The characters were interesting, they made me feel curious about many things. I really appreciate the author for writing this book 😍😍