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Brom, your typical nobody, is reborn in the land of Skyrim years before the events of the game. He is determined to become the ruler that he knows this world needs if it is going to survive the return of the dragons. As he fights both men and beast to rise in power, he realizes that the strongest demons are the ones we face in ourselves.
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The story is interesting and I think its very clever to take him in the situation with a video game instead of being born in a place infected with those godzilla monsters. The writer has done a quite appreciative work.
Just perfect! One of the best Skyrim fanfiction I have read so far! Keep up the great work. I can see almost no error in the stort and it is very smooth! Please keep updating! Your neighbourhood friendly 👑
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Cool but kjnda not cool, i give good grade, its good story but very long and kinda bad like i dont feel inside the world.. yOU KNOW WHWT I.MANEQ
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It's still early to judge but the writing quality is good, without too many grammatical errors, the story until now is quite rushed but I think it's because it's a kingdom building story and the author wants to cut short the introduction, let's see where this story goes
Great so far. I really am enjoying this. Author is really good at captivating their audience. Maybe some of the details aren't written out as well as I would like, but it in no way makes the story bad. Love it!
Great story but the story line is not get to the story faster or slower Great work Really and ElderScroll in The college of winter hold Great game love story
I am not familiar with Skyrim, but I enjoy watching these characters develop and look forward to reading what happens next. You could use a good editor, but the storyline is great.
Writing this review quite early, don't know where it is in the future but right now this story is pretty good. One of the few TES fanfiction out there that does not suck huge balls!
This is not your typical reincarnated/transported into a game with system UI and EXP EXP EXP. Although the story is set in the Skyrim world and has Skyrim references, the story feels real, just like a fantasy novel. The writing is good without discernable mistakes for the average reader. The novel updates every day. The story so far is great and has the potential for growth. I can't wait to see where this goes. READ IT!
Not fan of the sky rim, but the story writing quality very good. ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏
The writing quality is not that bad but it is a short unfinished story featuring a MC with the IQ of a Skeever and the conversation ability of a mute draugr.
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I really liked the story. You should continue it. As it is it just ends with a cliffhanger... Don't let it end like that. As a result, I recommend people to read no further than chapter 26 unless more than 27 chapters are made.
This is literally the only other Skyrim oc ive seen that has been developed in a well thiught out setting and with an plot.......................
This story is mine, and yes I am reviewing my own novel. This novel is the best okay-ish Skyrim novel you will read. It has a terrible story, terrible characters, pre-built world, and a lazy author. All of this combines into an amazing novel that you should definitely read and leave comments on. Thanks, Me