/ Anime & Comics / sistema h en el mundo cruzado?
摘要
que arias si un día descubres que eres un bebé y tienes un sistema sin embargo este sistema no es sano :).
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- 故事發展
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寫檢討
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it's really bad to read through Google translator, it's just that it's very strange and it's in my vocabulary that if something is strange and acceptable, it's perfect.
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man, your fanfic is horrible, the grammar is horrible, the spelling is even worse, it's like a doodle and you have the nerve to not edit to improve your fanfic, so you suck at being a real author
5 estrellas! Es lo más raro que he leído en mi vida ...