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I do not own Martial God Asura or any other work of which I make references coo againsth the gods and one piece
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Love it as long as there are constant updates.........................................................................................................................................................
I don't get why the MC chose to look like one of the ugliest men in anime. WHATDAFUCKKKKKKKKKKK(KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKkkkkkklllllllkkkkkk(kleghWHATDAFUCKKKKKKKKKKK
PLEASE DONT DROP THIS LIKE OTHER NOVELS PLEASE DONT DROP THIS LIKE OTHER NOVELS PLEASE DONT DROP THIS LIKE OTHER NOVELS PLEASE DONT DROP THIS LIKE OTHER NOVELS
Love it😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 so don't you dare drop it or else 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
I like this work its got alot of things to happen it i cant wait to see where this goes.keep up the as like your pressionallness in doing your work(writing) as i personally admire your ideas as well
Aslong its not harem this story should be good Since mc not qualified to have harem.......................................... Just thinking are gonna surgeon mc body
This is good so far.Please keep writing more and often.I would hate it if you stopped writing.This will be so popular if you keep writing.Thank you.
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Thk for updating. Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
Hope every week release chapter just even 1 Hope every week release chapter just even 1 Hope every week release chapter just even 1 .Hope every week release chapter just even 1 Hope every week release chapter just even 1
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I hate this fanfiction, like (I have to keep the original story), this is a fucking fanfic, change................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................