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Should have been better

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作者: joondabest

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Two friends go on an Asian tour and enjoy their accurate time, but a different type of predicament was waiting for them on the other side. Will they be able to come back to their regular circumstances? All the while, One of them falls in love with a Korean idol and the episodes they meet will be unfortunate in the outcome. Discovering true love was just a portion of it, yet, it reverses into horror for one of them. While they tour the Asian countries to circumvent something, although, in conclusion, they drop to it.
"Expect the unexpected."
"There is a reason for everything happening, either good or bad, everything goes."
"Avoid it, and it comes back at you."

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    Vaidehi_Chittoor_4242

    quite an interesting storyline. Mesmerized with the characters of the story.can feel each and every part of it.cant wait to read the next parts.keep up the good work

    3yr
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    Kalyani_Eunni

    So surprised by the language and vocabulary used here. I'm very glad to read such great content. I can say that it is very promising to the readers and keeps us engaged in the story :)

    3yr
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    Shreeya_Krishnan

    very well written, very passionate writing.. the character introduction was very good✨the story line is very good vocabulary ..very inspiring and must read.

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    3yr
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    Bansi_kumar

    very inspiring story the readers must be amazed by the procursions used here its very optimizing the content here written im so glad to read it [img=update]

    3yr
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    Ramakrishna_Eunni

    it was too good and refreshing to read this story. it's something related to nowadays kids lifestyle. Good to know the inside personality n elevation of characters. Eagerly waiting for more episodes...👌👍

    3yr
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    Lisa_Udumorugbo

    INTERESTING INTERESTING INTERESTING Wow....I'm so in love with this novel🤩🤩...from the character development yo story line...it's worth my five star

    3yr
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    A_Stranger_1012

    I am very impresses about what the author have done with the story so far, the characters, the story, the love. I am a person that believe in love to much and i glad with how the love in this story is showcased so keep doing what you are doing. Great job.

    3yr
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    Gascart

    I usually don't read this kind of genre, but this is a good story. The style of writing is captivating and at the end of chapters make you want to read more. Grammar and vocabulary are also good. It's a great work. I recommend it!

    3yr
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    TaintedMetal

    It's a romance, and it's a recommended read for anyone who enjoys that kind of genre. It's also akin to Korean culture in a way, seeing how there's a lead character from the said country. The story is simple and easy to understand, and the direction is clear from the beginning. However if there's anything I need to criticize, I feel the characters aren't striking at the moment; nobody really stands out but maybe they will in future chapters. One of my biggest criticisms is the grammar and choice of words. I understand what is going on in the story, but the execution needs some work. But so far so good author, keep up the good direction, but try to make your characters stand out more especially in a genre that is common for most readers, and try to take into consideration on your word choices and structure. Certain parts can be spaced out for easier reading and to an extent, greater effect.

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    3yr
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    ibbygal

    It has a really nice storyline....the settings and characters are really captivating..kudos to the Author. I recommend this book🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽🖤

    3yr
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    Henrietta_Otu

    This is really a great work and a master piece. I just love the flow of events and scenes. Every turning page and really captivating and keeps one glued to their seats, leaving you wanting for more.

    3yr
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    feejae

    Imagining myself in Macy’s shoes makes me want to impulsively book plane tickets with my bestie to Korea! I love how relatable the story is, and I’m looking forward to more updates ❤️❤️❤️

    3yr
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    auroar2314

    A very interesting storyline ... the characters are developed in a good way so far..... I really loved the author's writing style.... definetlybwould recommend this to everyone and waiting for more chapters[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

    3yr
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    HauntedDreams

    Interesting story with an amazing storyline. The details put into this is amazing. The chapters improve bit by bit leaving you wondering what's going to happen next. Can't wait to see more.

    3yr
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    Stoptakingusername

    This most certainly has potential even if not is a little rushed in places. But I really like how as you read you get the feeling this cannot and will not end well. I’m calling it right now, the guy is not what he seems. The author does a great job in saying “ hey, this guy, not a good dude.”

    3yr
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    cutelit4ever

    the story had a good pacing and very nice... the way the author shows the characteristic of the characters is really good... it is really well made... I hope to see kore from you!!! Kudos to Author!!!

    3yr
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    Blessing_Ewetumo

    I haven't read much of the chapters, just five in all, but already I'm hooked. This story is flowing with awesome potential, and the author is doing a good job creating such a masterpiece. I'm a fine, and will definitely be voting for this story.👍

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    3yr
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    KimAmai

    This was an interesting story. I really like how the author took their time and explain the Korean. I am a Kpop fanatic, so it was really well written. Despite the grammatical mistakes, the plot was easily understood. Everything was happening so fast. I really like stories that are straight to the point. Great story. Keep it up. 👍

    3yr
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    oni_latte

    The story line is good, but i personaly cant picture anything, the characters seem a bit plain. though I must admit that the story does have a lot of potential. keep up the good work

    3yr
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    not_sou_serious

    In my opinion, the story has a very unique and attractive story line. New concepts always get hit and popular! Good work and all the best. 😎

    3yr
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