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Due to a fortunate event Eli discovered a library called mystic secrets of desire and after that his life completely changed.
join him in his story about how he became extraordinary from just a normal high school student.
WARNING: novel focus on 18+ erotic scenes and my English is also not that great.
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The story is awesome and interesting 😂 😍 by now please try to maintain it as it is at the starting till the end and write more chapters soon i wipl be waiting fot them 😍😍
More about *** and seduction since the title is all about it. And the pacing is too fast from the library to the jungle?? How was it. Just focus on the title and im sure more will be reading this.
The story builds up well but you feel some emotional disconnects. I feel the descriptions used could have been more vivid though. The rush that you feel after reading a good erotica is something that is difficult to explain in words.
It is very interesting from the start where the boy was so engroved by the misterious fine girl that she follow her into the library made up of pure goldand we are looking forward to the next chapter
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This story has almost no good character development or setting. The transition from the library to the jungle was too quick and the writer used only simple words with incorrect grammar.
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I really enjoyed reading this story despite the not so interesting title. However, the detail description are still lacking but can easily improved. This will help to convey the message the author wanted to convey. Better still the xx scene could be complimented with pictures Nonetheless, the characters are interesting and the plot are not so stereotype hence why i am still reading. Moreover i was hoping that since the novel is no longer free, the chapters should be longer to commentsurate the number of power stones payable for each chapter
I really enjoyed reading this story despite the not so interesting title. However, the detail description are still lacking but can easily improved. This will help to convey the message the author wanted to convey. Nonetheless, the characters are interesting and the plot are not so stereotype hence why i am still reading. Moreover i was hoping that since the novel is no longer free, the chapters should be longer to commentsurate the number of power stones payable for each chapter
I like itttttttt. I can't wait for the next chapterrrrrrrrrrr. Please updateeeeee. ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
I really enjoyed reading this story despite the not so interesting title. However, the detail description are still lacking but can easily improved. This will help to convey the message the author wanted to convey. Nonetheless, the characters are interesting and the plot are not so stereotype hence why i am still reading. Moreover i was hoping that since the novel is no longer free, the chapters should be longer to commentsurate the number of power stones payable for each chapter
The story have nice plot to it n i enjoyed reading it. But it should have more graphic n pictures inside to enable the reader better view of the scenario. Describing ***** sessions need to be more descriptive to ensure the message got through to the reader. I jist wish that the story is a bit longer for each chapter. Nonetheless, kudos to the author...nicely done...
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I didn't even get a chance to finish the first chapter without seeing that you have true talent, it caught my attention immediately and I love writing about *** stories, but this was amazing keep up the good work.
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