摘要
Ludwig had a common childhood, besides the fact that he had built unusual amounts of resentments towards his family. They had treated him with much hate, especially in his later years, so much that his resentment exploded and he had decided to do something absolutely unforgiveable.
With this as a start, he studied and came closer to those that felt the same as he did, he repeated it and trained in this until it became a professional hobby, making him proud of himself to a part. He truly enjoyed his hobby while his life bore fruits, as he married and got children, learning from his mistakes of his parents, the child grew up in a loving home.
As he arrived at the last moments of his life, still not caught or even suspected, he saw the past years in a way that gave him many happy thoughts. His soul left his body, and he lost all feelings towards the world. At that moment, something surprising happened, which shook his whole soul.
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I don’t know how to feel about this book. The idea is great but the world building is a little nonsensical, the dialogs and motivations of the characters are somewhat flimsy and overall up to chapter 13 it is a bit dull. I struggle to keep reading but at the same time I like the idea. Anyway, I’m quite thorn about it.
i don't know about anything else but I do know that every fkin character in any cultivation novel is a serial killer, I will try the novel tho. Btw, kudos for trying to write a novel. I know many people that are stumped in their creative thinking phase...that's why the 5 stars
A truly great book, absolutely not to be missed. My friend, you deserve this praise. Everything is so perfect, it reminds me of the emotions I felt when I first started reading novels. It's simply wonderful.
Shameless author giving himself a 5 star review! Alright, I will make it short for all new readers: You should read the 'Notes before reading' since it includes pretty much the path this novel will take, but to make it even shorter for the ones that just want to quickly see whether this novel might be something for them: Check out the tags, I thoughtfully chose them and all of them will be plot points, so if you see something you like, I am sure you will enjoy my novel! I am writing diligently on this novel with a 2chapters per day schedule to give every reader a lot of content. Though it is obvious that this is a longer project, you should read now to be able to proudly say you were a loyal reader of this novel before it became famous!